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| Lerrinus 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful! Only Danny can bring back Mac the way he did, nice writing! :-) |
| MsJonyReb 2007-10-18 ch 1, | abuseOh I do hope there is more to this. I enjoyed this chapter and the look into Mac and Danny. |
| fruitbat00 2006-07-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseWOW...I am a bit late I know just catching up on things I missed. I adored this so insightfull Mac as usual thinking to much about everything. Danny trying to let him know hes not alone. Just loved the whole Mac POV thing and I think you have him down so well on this. |
| Meine Welt 2006-06-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was darker than your other fics. ^^ But I liked! *dances* Keep it up! |
| MTG 2006-06-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseWonderfull story as always. Love all the thoughts running through Mac's head as he tries to cope as he tries to hold himself together. And Danny trying to talk to him trying to get him to understand that he can move on. I always look forward to your stories. |
| Dark Angel's Blue Fire 2006-06-24 ch 1, | abusei loved it! It was soo sweet! Loved it! |
| Dybdahl 2006-06-23 ch 1, | abuseI'm going to be a little cruel to you this time, 'cos i'm in the middle of my 4 day with next to no sleep, and when I don't sleep I tend to get sarcastic. A little teenage drama like for my taste. The story isn't bad, but I kept picturing Lindsay Lohan in place of Danny. My mind is to fogged up to write anything else, other then to tell you that even if I enjoy watching Argentina play ('cos they are really fun to watch), I was dressed in all orange... I will probably appologise for this review and come up with something more constructive to say once I get some sleep, whenever that happends. |