this is really interesting and descriptive, I really like it.

Keep it up, and update soon! Pwease!

I am astounded with this story. You write so well and the story is so enthralling that it breaks my heart to see that it hasn't been updated in so long.

There are only a few fics whom I've wanted so desperately to know what happens next, to see what the author can come up with and how they tell it in their writing. This story is definitely one of them.

Your writing is like an abstract work of art; you can't just glance at it and move on to the other pieces in a gallery. There is so much detail and care that you put into that I tell that you worked very hard on it. I can't help but stare and try to catch every little thing you've put in.

So I truly hope that this will be continued and finished, because this is a tale very deserving of an ending.

Wonderful, beautiful job. You have a way with words, and it would be a shame not to weave that magic into the rest of this story.

~nk

Oh, could you please continue this fic? I'm dying to know what happens next. Please don't just let such a good fic end like that!^_^

This story is amazing! Even though it's been a while since you've updated, I hope you haven't given up on it...it would be so very sad...I'm putting on story alert, I don't want to miss an update! ^-^

*cry* You have a gift, man. I just read this lil prologue... and I'm already hooked! It's so beautiful, especially the end.

I always think the "There is no greater glory than to be killed my the one you love the most" is serious BS. I mean, COME ON! I can see it from THIS point of view but, seriously, in any other sitch', it's be stupid! You would want to BE with the one you loved! Wouldn't you feel horribly betrayed (not to mention full of hate) if the person you loved most killed you?!? *breathes* I'm okay now.

Yeah, Subaru definetely won their bet

one thing, you say "shutter" instad of "shudder" in the fic "Void". I forgot to say that when I was reviewing it.

this is so good, with a somewhat twisted beauty. really looking forward to the next chapter. Please, do update soon

I don't remember how exactly I found this, but I'm glad I did.

This is absolutely beautiful in such a delightfully morbid way. First of all, you writing is phenomenal - your diction is breathtaking, and I absolutely love your syntax. Every now and then you write a run-on revived by so many semicolons I get a little lost in all the language, but since sometimes that enchances the experience I suppose that's all right. Not only that, but you have a marvelous plot. That might sound strange, but many fanfiction writers (including myself, unfortunately) either focus on a thorough plot or meticulous writing skills; you, however, incorporated both.

I love the descriptions, really, I do. The imagery is so creative at times I wonder how you do it; I also love how you always manage to avoid any sense of repetativeness by using multiple synonyms (I've learned some vocabulary while reading this). Your characterization of Subaru and Seishirou are spot on, and while Kamui is a little too childlike for me at times, I'm still quite attached to his character.

I am absolutely enthralled by this - I have to be, I sat here for two and a half hours reading the whole thing. (It's 2:24 am, if you're curious.) It feels like I've done everything Subaru has - which, I might add, is thoroughly exhausting in a very satisfying yet rueful way - and now you've left me madly curious as to what's going to happen next.

I'll be looking foward to the next installment.

I really enjoyed reading this, and wondering where the story goes after seishirou is awake. Please go on~

Hi, it's my from livejournal. (I'm of course just assuming you're 0ri_l on lj, if not I apologise) ^^;

This was the only way I could get hold of you...basically, I figured you never got my reply to that post on my lj...where I said that my late reply wasn't because I didn't want to talk to you, but because my internet had been cut..

Umm, yeah, sorry to leave this as a review (without an actual comment on the fic even, I'm so sorry o.o), but I couldn't get an e-mail or anything..so..yeah..^^;

I really enjoyed this chapter - esp. the interactions between Subaru and Kamui (they are really cute!).

Yeah, sorry about the miscommunication.

I'm ashamed that I've never reviewed your story before because it certainly deserves it. It's rare to
find Subaru portrayed so beautifully in fanfiction. You show his pain and desperation with such
agonizing clarity that they've almost become tangible. Thus far, I have enjoyed reading this
immensely (including your most recent chapter, which is not kind of dull, despite what you said
in your author’s notes), and I'm eagerly awaiting more.

Somehow, I get the feeling that Subaru isn't going to be happy with the result of what he's done,
and may even come to regret his decision to bring Seishirou back. You said that something is
going to happen to Seishirou that to him is probably worse than death, so I'm guessing that he's
going to be forced to feel at last, and (assuming this is the case) I wonder if he’d become angry at
Subaru for this. I can understand why Subaru's apprehensive about how Seishirou's going to react
when he finally wakes up.

Something worse than death, huh?

He starts getting emotions? Loses his powers? Loses his . . . tree? Becomes a vegetable?

Or Subaru's going to leave him and elope with Kamui?

The way you write seems rather long-winded, like . . . you use too many words to describe something, until it becomes tedious to read. That's pretty much the only complaint I've got, though. Update soon?

I'm ashamed you haven't more review coz your writting is very good and your describe perfectly (in my point of view) Subaru's tortured mind. Maybe peoples are afraid by your very long chapters. Have you thought uptade shorter chapters more often ? It would be more attractive for readers if you cut your story in sub-chapter.

You show brightly the mix of fragility, guilt and sadness in Subaru's mind. Your description of his character is affectingly and bring us in his feeling. And I'm touched by his relation ship with Seishiro.

Just a question ... after reading it entirely, I was wandering ... don't you share Kamui's eyes obsession with Subaru?

disturbing... yes...

But it is good. carry on