That was really really great. I'd actually only ever heard one other song by A Perfect Circle and that was...I think Sleeping Beauty is one of theirs? Anyways, so I looked it up when I started reading this (googled the lyrics then went to youtube) and I have to say, it's a pretty awesome song. I'll definitely be putting it on my iPod.

Well written, good plot, over all REALLY good. And I love how Axel and Demyx are both so...how do I put it here...Well, Axel is seductive, dark adn sexy, while Demyx is submissive, and he seems to have this sort of...lonliness? Maybe...something along those lines...maybe I'm dissecting this too much, lol. Anyways, GOOD JOB!

I just love how thet even so it's dark pic you didn't fill it with metaphors.
Please write more dark pics[with Demyx.please]!

I love this story! It's a balanced mix of dark and loving that is well executed! In fact, it's dear to me in that this story is the first place I heard of A Perfect Circle. They're marvelous and I have you to thank for my knowledge of it, so thank you ever so much! ^-^

O~O
I love this! So delicious!
Yummy!
Axel! Demyx! A collar! This has evrything a fanfiction should have ! Including a great theme song! I.Love.This.
-favorites-
-slaps huge boogeyman!axel saying GOOD JOB on to your forehead-

AWSOME! Yey!

I do not CARE if this was supposed to be a oneshot or something, and a song fic to boot, but this DESERVES more! I love dark AxelxDemyx fics, and this one put mine to shame. Homigod, this was so freaking awesome, I loved it!

Anna

Okay, I had to see what this one was about after a mention in your other fic.

So deliciously creepy and dark. Reminds me of those obsessed fen with their favorite star. You just know something's gonna snap sometime. Fantabulous.

Thanks for sharing!

:O That was amazing. Dark fics are love! You matched it to the song perfectly, too! Points for that.

And extra points for the collar. ♥ Ohgods... @.@ Collars are... like... drugs to me.

snerk. ;D

Brilliant job with this. I'm adding it to my favorites~!

~Oblivion

It may be on the dark side, but I loved every single minute of it. < 33
Demyx seemed normal to me, but then, I never seem to really notice when characters differ from their usual personalities and actions.
The boogey-man!Axel was amazing. Possessive and controling, yet Demyx didn't mind.
Maybe I'm just happy because I adore the AxelDemyx pairing, but I thought this was really good. This is so a favourite. X3

I loved when ya sent it to me and I love it now! Good job! XD