Heh... it's been quite some time since the last time I posted some reviews on your story. I must say that the story is progressing very well. I especially like the chapter with Ratchet - poor guy. XD

As for the suggestions: I personally would like to see some more chapters where Autobots babysit Holi. Maybee you could introduce some Season 2 Autobots like Red Alert, Powerglide, Smokescreen, Tracks (best if paired up with Raoul) or... Omega Supreme. :D

Also, it would be fun to introduce some action with Decepticons, I don't know maybee with Megatron kidnaping Holi?

Hope this helps...

Have Cliffjumper babysit Holi! He could show off his glass gas and other guns. Then have Holi accidentally blast CJ with his own glass gas!

But it's up to you. :)

Bring the Decepticons! XD Let all heck break loose! xD

lol i love Ratch
im sure hes gonna make Jack share that high grade with him

D'aw...=D

this story is so going on my alert list! It's so funny! From hide and seek, "playing" with Prowl to Sunny's potty-mouth, dino flamethrower, and using Prowl as a coloring book, this is one cute story! You should definitly do Jazz! Maybe do Prowl again? This is one awesome story!

hehehehehehe. my daddy did the same thing for me when i asked for a pony. and i didn't get my puppy until i was sixteen. and that was only because our neighbor's boxer killed my cat. but this was a sweet chapter. father/daughter time is always so special. good job. keep up the good work. update soon please. Merry Christmas.

aww daddy and daughter together
they both seemed to enjoy themselves

aw, its really awesome! I cant wait for the next chapter!! really cool! please update it soon :)

it was some bonding time. i like it. continue on

nice chapter! ^^ i liked it. If i were Prime though, I'd definitely keep an optic on my daughter now. keep it coming!

This is one serious chapter alright. But it rocks!
I can't wait for the next chapter.

-Sotwt-

FEAR HOLI AND HER ALLMIGHTY CRAYONS!XD please update

That was so sad!! Poor Holi, having those nightmares!! Please update soon!!

poor holi. nightmares really suck. very good. keep it up.