I must say, I really am disappointed.

Interesting so far.

Your story is pretty good, but your author notes in the beginning suck. Such foul language. I do care about the plot and I wish I had one so I could write a story. Also, if it's 2:00am then don't you mean Good * Morning?

Well done battle scene

I am looking forward to the battle.

Aw. Pyro got her first Pokemon. ^.^

YYay, i want a fat labrador pokemon!

Woot. Go Pyro. Fire Pokemon roxxor!

I wonder which one will leave first, Pyro (expultion) or Ms. Kenny (quits job).
This is a very intresting read. I also like fire pokemon.

In my fanfic, I try to refrain using overused characters. I do a a Nurse Joy, but she is the black Flaffy of the family and nobody talks about her.

Good work! An interesting character piece. Yea...you should try to write and origional trainer story! I'd read it.
-PP