 fififolle 2006-06-26 . chapter 1LOL! How delightful! What a fun read. My jaw hurts from grinning too much. I was like OMGosh , WHAT is she going to do!?! Fantastic. I'm so glad she clocked John one, and just the whole scene was delicious. The touches of poignancy gave it so much more depth, it was real nice. Good old Ronon, haha. And I bet Carson would like to get some coffee. See, men aren't so bad after all LOL. Long as you don't expect too much hehe. Wonderful fic! Looks like you got your groove back ;) |
 Jedi40 2006-06-24 . chapter 1I just loved this fic Jen. GO LIZ GO! |
 Reefgirl 2006-06-24 . chapter 1MWAHAHAHAHAHA go Elizabeth, good story |
 NenyaVilyaNenya 2006-06-23 . chapter 1Hehe. just awesome from beginning to end. Chromedome, Tori, Perky, contemplating sending Carter a message... the guys.
and of course, the ending. Lmao. hehe. amazing how one glance can change one's mind. |
 Admiral Lily 2006-06-23 . chapter 1Ha! What I wouldn't give to see Elizabeth slap Shep on the back of the head like that. ;)
AL |
 Belisse 2006-06-23 . chapter 1OH.MY. GOD!
I loved it! Every single part of it. Everything felt so much like the realistic reactions people have on those situations. Men... I loved it, again Ronon checking Weir's ** at the end was hilarious.
AWESOME JOB! |
 emergencyfan 2006-06-23 . chapter 1Did he just check out her ** before he’d stepped through?
hee hee hee |
 Dr. Dredd 2006-06-23 . chapter 1Oh. My. God. This was awesome. Nice touch naming the woman "Tori." And I absolutely loved the line "It’s not like she left to go on a shopping spree with a group of friends."
Now she needs to go leer at Carson for awhile... :-) |