that was good. I felt pain as I read the story. I mean, think about it. If you just came back home from playing outside and find your father dead on the floor, wouldn't you go crazy on getting revenge? The last line was funny. It was just like the line this guy from the princess bride said as he fought his dad's murderer.

This is sad...

O..k. This is just part of the story, right?

When I read this, I thought it was kind of funny, it sort of sounds like something I watched on *chuckles*

You know, it's rather hard to sympathize for Edo's predicament when all you managed to do is to squeeze eight years worth of pain into 145 words. Nice try, but no. I didn't feel anything but boredom after reading this drabble.

That was good! A tad bit short for my taste, but I liked it nevertheless.

Aw! That's sad! Only, it's short, so maybe you could add a bit more too it? I like the style you write in. Keep it up!