hmm...Definately a peice of a series story...good writing, grasp of charactors, grasp of the lore...I still think you should have written the episode, but hey. I'm not the one who'd have to write it.

Dude,..at this point in the story,..I'd rate you a loser. Your skill of writing is good for everything except legnth, but I stand by my figst comment because you skipped the ENTIRE episode. Did you write it somewhere else under a different title? Are you going to show it in later chapters, possibly as explanitory comentary? Or were you just lazy?
Some friends said this was a good story so I'm going to continue reading on faith and hope it gets more exciting. See you in a few chapters, at least you know how to write and have a good grasp of the concepts you used. Maybe...we'll see.

Great story. So are you going to write more, Because I would read it.

So, exactly HOW is Glory going to deal with her "Key" having just as much power(if not more) as Herself(itself)

what if we can't wait for the sequel...need more now

Ooh, good choice. Cordelia practically WAS Illyria in high school. If anyone can be a cold, unfeeling superpower, it's Cordelia. ;)

Great story. I really enjoyed it.

Well, that was WEIRD! But very cool. But weird, for sure. Did I mention weird? ;)

Lorne rocks. I love Lorne.

I love it when stuffy British men fight.

Poor Joyce. She always was such a good sport.

So...confused... Must...continue...reading. Aargh.

Great story, though. Love it!

Ooh, this looks promising!

Oh Jeebus this is my favourite work of yours so far! Why? Because you didn't have Dawn survive at the end! =P

Illyria is my second favourite character in the entire Buffy/Angel-verse, next to Angel that is, and having her back is bitchin'! Bah, Glorificus is goign to get her ass kicked! =P

I hope you don't have it in the sequel that Dawn is somehow able to come back or still exists. That would ruin the ending! But I trust you. =D

~Have a Nice Day

Really enjoyed reading this.
All the 'mean' godesses are there(Except Jasmine,but,hey,we got a Blue Cordy.Even better.)

Plot(Very original one!) and good,insightful writing = Happy Louvil!

Hum...So,where is that sequel? *G*

Great job!

very cool