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Byakugan789 5/10/08 . chapter 7
hmm...Definately a peice of a series story...good writing, grasp of charactors, grasp of the lore...I still think you should have written the episode, but hey. I'm not the one who'd have to write it.
Byakugan789 5/10/08 . chapter 2
Dude,..at this point in the story,..I'd rate you a loser. Your skill of writing is good for everything except legnth, but I stand by my figst comment because you skipped the ENTIRE episode. Did you write it somewhere else under a different title? Are you going to show it in later chapters, possibly as explanitory comentary? Or were you just lazy?

Some friends said this was a good story so I'm going to continue reading on faith and hope it gets more exciting. See you in a few chapters, at least you know how to write and have a good grasp of the concepts you used. Maybe...we'll see.
Tony the jew 5/7/07 . chapter 7
Great story. So are you going to write more, Because I would read it.
K-sama 4/18/07 . chapter 2
So, exactly HOW is Glory going to deal with her "Key" having just as much power(if not more) as Herself(itself)
Rose 11/26/06 . chapter 7
what if we can't wait for the sequel...need more now
invis 7/31/06 . chapter 7
Ooh, good choice. Cordelia practically WAS Illyria in high school. If anyone can be a cold, unfeeling superpower, it's Cordelia. ;)

Great story. I really enjoyed it.
invis 7/31/06 . chapter 6
Well, that was WEIRD! But very cool. But weird, for sure. Did I mention weird? ;)
invis 7/31/06 . chapter 5
Lorne rocks. I love Lorne.
invis 7/31/06 . chapter 4
I love it when stuffy British men fight.
invis 7/31/06 . chapter 3
Poor Joyce. She always was such a good sport.
invis 7/31/06 . chapter 2
So...confused... Must...continue...reading. Aargh.

Great story, though. Love it!
invis 7/31/06 . chapter 1
Ooh, this looks promising!
Xephon 7/30/06 . chapter 7
Oh Jeebus this is my favourite work of yours so far! Why? Because you didn't have Dawn survive at the end! P

Illyria is my second favourite character in the entire Buffy/Angel-verse, next to Angel that is, and having her back is bitchin'! Bah, Glorificus is goign to get her ass kicked! P

I hope you don't have it in the sequel that Dawn is somehow able to come back or still exists. That would ruin the ending! But I trust you. D

Have a Nice Day
Louvil 7/23/06 . chapter 7
Really enjoyed reading this.

All the 'mean' godesses are there(Except Jasmine,but,hey,we got a Blue Cordy.Even better.)

Plot(Very original one!) and good,insightful writing Happy Louvil!

Hum...So,where is that sequel? *G*

Great job!
Bobboky 7/22/06 . chapter 7
very cool
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