Cool, I liked it a lot!

-Sunday

Yes... very nice! I really really like this! *faves*

wow...i really liked this

well done

ooh! that was really good. not too fluffy, not too angsty, just aobut a perfect mix. i definitely liked it.

... interesting... Not sure what this is about, but this has great detail.

Well done! That was a really great glimpse into the thoughts of Mimi.

Very, very good. Your only follies are that a few words are where they shouldn't be, and you slip back and forth from present tense to past tense from time to time. Other then that, this was great. I love that, 'Wonderland gone wrong'and the quote from Pink floid, and the details about Mimi getting progressively unwell. Very nice.