Very evocative. Great job.

not gunna cry, not gunna cry, not gunna cry...

EK!

omg... i sound like a heart monitor... great first chapter! what a terrible cliffhanger though! more soon!

It was ok.

CK... sad stuff makes me cry...

WOW! This. Was. Amazing. Wow. Really well written and even a little bit freightening... Excellent piece, absolutely loved it!

I've said this before, and I'll say it again. Evil woman! Poor Sheppard. I found this quite disturbing and frightening,and as for the end...evil, evil Celtic Knot. I know it's up to the reader to decide how this story ends, so Sheppard is revived and lives happily ever after in my head...until we whump him again, lol!