I liked how we don't find out the reason why Mary's sad until that one time, where it's revealed that Dickon's wearing a uniform, going off to war. That's pretty impressive. And I love Dickon's little speech about time. Loved it.

Great fic. Loved it. A bit of angst is good for the soul, every now and again... ^_^

Ja-ne! ^_-

I quite liked it. I loved your description of his patience...after all, any boy who can tame wild creatures is a well set up to tame emotional girls. Or at least he's got a step in the right direction. Good stuff.

I really liked this! You should definately write more...I love the way you refer to time. The personification (sp?) is amazing.

oh, i liked this very much. your dickon voice is very good, which is a difficult thing to do, i think. it's just a really lovely angsty fic :)

YES. this was lovely... and if you plan to write more on this story, i really hope all the angst leads up to a happy ending ;) (im a big sucker for those) please write more secret garden fanfiction... there is far too little out there, and youre a wonderful writer. thanks for writing this one!

I really liked that! I think that "The Secret Garden" is a really good fandom for drabbles/angsty-one-shots/romantic-one-shots, etc. I thought that Dickon's accent was done very well.

prongs

Oh, that was so good! I loved it.
You should definitely writer more Secret Garden fics. :]