Loved it the first time...and I still love it. One word: Perfect.

This is a brilliant story and is exelently written and is a perfect endindg to the story of the two. I have no comlaints at all and I think your writting style is briliant plese keep it up.

true to my promise i am here! I loved the idea and your understanding of the characters is breathtaking! You have such wonderful ideas for the story. Your descriptions were very crisp! Im writing two stories at the same time, its difficult but I love the feel of guiding my beloved characters to happiness. You did a beautiful job! :3

Hehe. ^-^; Sorry for not reviewing before.

I really liked it! I'm glad Yugi and Co. get to see Atem again! Aziza seemed pretty cool, too.

I actually did look at the summaries for some for your other fics. Sorry, I don't like yaoi.

Great story.:)

I loved it. I give this story two thumbs up.

Aww, now that was a sweet story.
It could use some more details, such as describing what the gang was doing while they were separated, (would've been a riot to see Tristen trying to drive a chariot), and maybe a run through with a spelling checker too, but overall, it was an interesting read.
The prophesy of the next King of Games and the shapeshifting were cool, but my
favorite part had to be the ending; it was short, but just so sweet.
*sniff*...Brothers forever!

AW! KAWAII!

Topaz: an amazing story! *bows*

your an amazing story writer, you're much better then me!

I LOVED it! It was totally awesome! You did a very good job!

I liked it. Very well written. The beginning made me want to read more. Can't to read the others (oh, this is BakuraMalikRulz21)

That was so great! You write so well and the Deviant illustrations were so cute! ^^

Gah! I loved that story, but I'm used to you writting YamixYugi Stories.

Hello there! This is spiritkitten from Youtube! I finally got around to reading this! It is so cute! *gets a hanky* you had me crying at the end! I'm so glad they can at least still see each other...but I could have sworn they wanted to get together...sorry that was my yaoi side of me that wants to see those two together...but still it was a very sweet story. All the characters seemed strong, though at times, they seemed to just vanish. I would actually like to see more descriptions of where everyone is. What do their surroundings look, the palace, the bedchambers, the oasis, the ice cream parlor. Also, this is just a little thing, I am stickler about grammer, and you might want to reread over your story, or have another set of eyes edit it, because I got confused many times, who was talking to who, about whom, and the scene where yugi, Atem, and Aziza (cool name by the way.) I didn't really know what was going on? Were they all together, or was Yugi off somewhere nearby out of ear-shot of the other's conversation. And as for Tea, Joey and Tristan, along with everyone else, they just seemed to pop up, then disappear again. Where did they go off to? Maybe you could add a little snippet of what everyone else was doing? OR at least where they were headed.

All right! That was my rant! Sorry if I came down a little harsh. But like I said this story is wonderful and cute. And if you just fix the grammer errors...among other things...this would be award-winning! Fantastic work I can't wait to read more!

hiya! Alright, well, I'm not a huge fan of OC stories, but this one was incredibly well written ^_^ I really like how you developed Azziza's character. You are an awesome writer, just spellcheck a bit more. This is a golden story. Good job! I'll check out your other one soon!

This was very good looked a little rushed here and there with a few missing words, not by much just a few but again great story. I'll try to read your sequel later within the day or hopefully tomorrow when I don't have to work okay