Please say we're going to see another chapter soon. I'm on the edge of my seat.

Please...continue.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter in this excellent tale.

Hopefully we'll see more chapters from this excellent story in the future. The descriptions are nicely done, through brief. Please continue posting.

Exquisite! Simply wonderful start! :)

Yay! I thought you had left this story for good! I'm so glad to see you're writing it again, I love it!

Just a quick question...are Heather and Alessa going to meet eachother again?

I love it! Good work!
You made me an AlessaxHeather shipper...
NOW FINISH THIS, OR ELSE!
Just joking, take your time n_n

Yoy have got to complete this. No one has yet created a complete Silent Hill 3, I know I've looked around the internet. I have yet to find one. You've got talent. You could write a complete version, and it would be awesome.

Quite possibly the best written novelization of Silent Hill 3 here.

Is it Pyramid Head?

"...the chilling cry of the doppelganger’s victim as the acid wreaked its deadly toll." This brought a tear to my eye. I thought it was quite sad.. poor thing. ;)

An intense chapter, PH...you had me sitting on edge. :)

Worst? There's more horrible things that are going to happen to Alessa.?

Nice piece of writing, PH.. :)

You certainly can write them...

Keep up the great job! :)

Wow. Just.. wow. I liked the way how you managed to keep the first chapter so suspenseful and terrifying, but also the imagery and the way it went while the more I read was really, REALLY, good. *Gives you two thumbs up* A good start for the first chapter, and I see that two more chapters are added, so I'll cease my little rant and read and review those.

Keep up the awesome work!

"Either way, she wasn’t sticking around to find out." And neither would I, PH!

Scary as always. Poor Alessa..

This girl needs an alternative life style.

Well written...as always! :)

First, I want to say...LMAO on your disclaimer!!

Damn PH, great chapter! You write magnificently...and the words just flowed like river.

Very intersting, intense and on the scary side chapter!

Thanks..I'm reading this right before I go to bed...LOL

You are a brilliant writer...looking forward to more! :)