that is really nice!

This was really nice. :)

Awesome...

I loved it...

The why him question it is one of the many that he have benn asking ourselves since it happen in the anime...

Really nice fic for a first DBZ fic. I like how you capture Bulma's sentiments in that she loves/hates him but in the end, she loves him. The scenario is AU and the characters are a bit OOC as a result (for one thing, I think Goku wouldn't be so timid and actually from his behavior, I thought for a moment you were going a yaoi route!). But I thought you handled it pretty well. I've seen worse fics for example and I like that you try not to tell but show such as Goku noticing details in Vegeta's dress and demeanor that suggest previous activities. I found that nicely subtle. I also like that your spelling and grammar doesn't constantly make me want to underline or cross out words. A lot of the fics posted online are ruined for me because of this. Good work and keep on writing!

wow, thats not quite where I thought that was going...It wasnt very out of character, but I thought Goku was in love w/ Veggie.

Good story!

Who knows why she chose Vegeta lol

That was different. I like different.