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| Gardian rose 2007-12-02 ch 3, anon. | abuseMake then both teach a class together. It would be so cool |
| MonkeyGirlNaNoDa 2007-09-22 ch 3,  | abuseCOOLSOME! UPDATE SOON OR I WILL SEND MEH DOBERMAN PUPPY TO LICK YOU TO DEATH!! BWAHAHAHA! just pliz update, K?! |
| sukai kitsune 2007-07-17 ch 3, | abuseThat is good cant wait til next ch boo tart is mean yaa Purin is nice! |
| romancerox 2006-11-02 ch 3, | abusewow, this surprised me. i thought purin and tart would be students, not teachers. hope u update, great story plot |
| SpiritOfRune 2006-10-28 ch 3, | abuseXD Taruto is like my old music teacher, but how exactly did an alien get a job teaching music? It's really good, I can't wait for the next chapter, are Purin and Taruto going to have a throwdown? That would be rather funny. |
| HeartAngel 2006-10-10 ch 3, | abuseLoved it.You better update soon! |
| Kathrynzala 2006-08-28 ch 3, | abuseU! Must! Update! Do! It! Now! |
| AquaBurst 2006-08-20 ch 3, | abuseo. up date. |
| RenAndKishu 2006-08-18 ch 3, | abuseWow. Purin is so much nicer that Taruto. Sorry for not commenting sooner, I read it but didnt finish at first because I had to eat supper and I just now realized I didnt comment so I finished the chapter and I think it was great! I hope you update it soon! |
| midori.complex 2006-08-09 ch 3, | abusePurin is such a cutie! She's silly and hyper, just like in TMM. I had a really neat teacher like that and you captured her character perfectly. The way you described the music as the students played Beautiful Goodbye was beautiful (pun intended). I hope you update soon, and thanks for posting this chapter up even though it was hard to write. Thanks, Midori |
| midori.complex 2006-08-09 ch 2, | abuseI enjoyed this chapter a lot. taruto's sudden outbursts turn comical toward the end and you just want to point and laugh at his poor pupils. ...Either that or I'm simply a mean person. But besides that, I believe you did a woderful job on this. I especially liked the way you described Su Pirika with an easy flow. It is obvious you enjoy writing in a fancy way and I dare say you pull it off quite nicely. Thanks, Midori |
| midori.complex 2006-08-09 ch 1, | abuseYou did a good job on the begining. It's not the cliche type where the main character gets out of bed in the morning and starts their day (that can get so old) And the dialog is realistic. The only thing that you could add to enhance the imagry (maybe, I mean, its already good) is more description. Like, what does this poor victim of Tar's look like? My favorite part would have to be when Anna almost kills her friend in a death grip. And the, "...eyes attacking vigorously at the evil adult." is a creative way to describe a glare. In short: good job! Thanks, Midori |
| Mew-Sahara 2006-08-06 ch 3, | abuse*sigh* SO GOOD! YOu have REALLY good despcription. And words! This is a great cliffie. I am on the edge for the next chappie, Update ASAP! |
| Young Wizard Link 2006-08-06 ch 3, | abuseCute is all I can say. Sadly, I'm kinda short for words today. ^^; |
| LizillaLi1213 2006-08-06 ch 1, | abuseThat was awesome and so cute! |