That gives that scene a nice twist i liked it But POOR Hisoka (Sob while Pulleing an a napkin with teeth)

Nice retelling of a very often-used scene.

Keep writing,

Winnie

Oh, so lovely. Your Tsuzuki is perfect, exactly the way I imagine him, and you do a beautiful job of portraying his train of thought as he's forced to watch Hisoka reliving Muraki's assault.

Will there be more? I'd love to know what happens next.

well done. angsty, emotional and very in character for all of them, and poor Hisoka needs a hug. From Tsuzuki obviously. Great job on a difficult topic!

I loved this fic! Great idea about the sychronization and you blended it well with what happened in the KoS arc. Your Tsuzuki voice is SPOT ON. I would love to see you write more from his POV. The part where he was thinking about teasing Hisoka for spying on his elders was GREAT. It was so bittersweet, showing his playful affection for his partner and yet the audience is cringing, knowing what is coming and that Tsuzuki won't be following through with that idea. Very, very nice. Thank you for sharing this.

That was divine, very powerful and I have noticed that since that 'melding' in volume 1 theres been no reference to it again (bearing in mind i havent seen anime and only on book 9) but you'd think there was some side-effects! Anyway this was really very good and confidently written.

*crying* are you doing to continue? please?

Thats was well done I would like to see more!

What a beautiful, sad fic this is. This is an interesting way for Tsuzuki to fully realize what Muraki did to Hisoka. My heart just keeps breaking for Hisoka and Tsuzuki. You did a fine job on this piece.