I must say I'm a bit surprized to see Marcus deny Ivanova but otherwise this is absolutely wonderful and I'd love to see more!

Cool! I really enjoyed this. I'd love to see more! You have a great feel for all the characters.

(I can't help it: I have to say I'm a little surprised that Marcus denied Ivanova... Maybe a secretive smile & silence, but denial? While he's never openly stated his feelings to her, he's put himself out there many times with his innuendos & his attitude toward her, & he's admitted his feelings to other friends (Stephen). Maybe letting the rumors reach her & letting her decide on her own would be just the thing...)

But I apologize for that comment, because I really did really enjoy this. You've got Zack down cold. I loved your observations about Lyta--like the detail of her struggling with the gloves & her creditchit--and all the observations the two men make, both about her & their surroundings. If you ever come back to this, I would love to read more.

"I'm not a normally superstitious man by nature, but I think that's what they call a 'jinx'. If this all suddenly goes to pot, it's your fault. I just want you to know that now." lolol. brilliant

Loved it :-)
I thought both Marcus and Zack were marvellously in character and I'm really intreiged to how Zack has jinxed the station. :-)

I very much enjoyed your story, nice to one of the lesser used characters getting an outing.

I thought the dialouge was good and in keeping with the characters.

that was very cute. i would most difinitly be interested in hearing the rest of the story. whta's the situation that Allen has jinxed them for? sounds like a lot of fun, keep writing. ^_^

~HIKARi

That was really good. I was really sorry that they didn't get Zach and Leta together. They would have been really cute. I'd like to see some more of this; a Thirdspace with Marcus in it sounds interesting. That was the only thing that movie lacked. Good luck writing.

Oh yeah!

I don't think I can find anything to query about it (except perhaps the gloves. That means Lyta has joined Psi Corp again, but Zack didn't know yet). Lovely written scene. Look forward to what's coming next.

LMAO!
JINX! Fantastic little piece. I think you should post a bit more, just so we can see where this might be going. I for one would like to read it!

Aww, that was cute. You have Zach down really well- all his little mannerisms and the way he speaks, and stuff. And, of course, I liked the subtle I/M stuff in there, too.

Here's news- Claudia's written a book about Ivanova's post-B5 life- here:

That should be fun to read!