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AGCourtney
2009-08-25 . chapter 6
3. I always did wonder why none of the other Disney princes were in the game trying to rescue their true loves.
Lunar-chan yet again
2007-04-24 . chapter 14
One more I almost forgot...Star Ocean Till the End of Time x KH2: Albel Nox x Aerith. The last one, lol...please update soon!
Lunar-tama again...
2007-04-17 . chapter 14
CRAP! I forgot one more with an SO3 character...Setzer x Mirage!! Mirage Koas is from Star Ocean 3, as aforementioned w/the others.
LunarReflection unlogged
2007-04-17 . chapter 9
Any other game? You mean even Enix games (since it's Square Enix)? I have a few requests --
Leon x Maria Traydor
Cloud x Nel Zelpher
Roger S. Huxley x Fairy!YRP
Fayt Leingod x Yuffie
Cliff Fittir x Tifa
Sephiroth x Sophia Esteed
Vivi x Peppita
Cliff, Sophia, maria, Roger, Peppita, Nel, Fayt are from STar Ocean Till the End of Time. Good luck desu! =D
Anon.
2007-04-17 . chapter 5
Heh, I must say the SephPaine one is original xD. Keep it up! ^^
kai-frost
2007-01-29 . chapter 14
Sorry for skipping the review for chappie 13. I love it! That translate to I LOVE YOU. Keep up the good work. I have no request currently, but will let you know when I do. Bye - bye... ^-^
Warp Ligia Obscura
2007-01-23 . chapter 14
Yup, read Centuries, loved it, love this too. I understand about OrgXI, I understand. Don't worry. It is your story after all. The drabbles were great, though I don't quite understand the "Gold Drive form" thing...

Way of Warriors has that tragic tinge to it, with the ambiguity of "end" that suggests the finality of the quest ending in victory or death. Good one.

Anyway, if you are still willing to accept requests...
1. Xigbar vs Artemis-using Dante, from Xigbar's POV.
2. Saix and Dante fight, with Dante using DT to counter Saix's "Berserk Mode", as seen from Saix's POV.
3. Nevan-using Dante vs Demyx, from Demyx's POV.
4. Hades gets a "friendly" visit from Mundus.

Thanks. :D
Warp Ligia Obscura
2006-12-26 . chapter 12
Hey mate! Started your own drabble set I see. If you still take requests, might I ask for some DMC ones?
Perhaps a Disney Cerb Vs DMC Cerb one?
Sora comparing Drive's dependence on his friends against DT relying on one's inner power?
Sora seeing DT in action and being reminded of how little control he actually holds over AntiForm, since both work on the basis of an "inner Darkness"?
Ideas, ideas...
kai-frost
2006-12-25 . chapter 12
So many chapters, so little reviews. Anyway, it's a nice read. If you still do request, can I have more of the Organization XII interaction in the next chapter? Please...(puppy eyes) @_@.
Splat on the Floor
2006-12-24 . chapter 12
You are unbelievably brilliant. Where do you get all of your ideas?

The last one with Jack was amazing. I can so see it happening. The Santa diet and Selphie crying really clinched it. Jack, you silly old bone bag.

I really liked the ones you made for my requests, too (Stitch is just too adorable), but the one about Sora discovering the drawing is so endearing. I'd really like to see that in the real game, it'd be such a touching moment. Plus the sequel to the "Riku's father" bit was hilarious.

Thanks for the great update, and Merry Christmas to you too!
hildebrant
2006-12-24 . chapter 12
thank you for using some of my ideas, I really appreciate it. Sora is about to meet his baby girl for the first time, man. I bet he'd be more prepared to fight Sephiroth than that. Jack finally gets to deliver the presents. God help us all. Keep up the good work and if you ever want something drawn or any ideas just come to me, I'll always be willing to lend a hand. Keep up the good work
Hildebrant
2006-12-19 . chapter 11
This has got to be one of the best written KH fanfics I've read in a long time. You've got some great ideas, I'm surprised I never thought of the idea of Sparrow going up against Capt. Hook, that's just brilliant. I love the little Sora/Kairi moments as well, also whom are you speaking about in Bittersweet? It's on my mind at the moment. Go ahead and email me back, I wouldn't mind swapping other ideas with you sometime so reply away
Splat on the Floor
2006-11-08 . chapter 11
Hooray! You actually took my suggestions! My most people just ignore me.
Of course, I loved 2, 3, and 4. #4 was especially hilarious, just because his mom didn't even know about 'ping', and the fact that almost everyone was there. The Aladdin/Olette and Peter/Alice were so sweet (Hah! Peter dumped Wendy!). I normally don't like romance, but you don't do it sickeningly sappy like everyone else does.
Wakka and Iago had fantastic dialogue. So true to themselves. #6 is mildly disturbing, but very amusing. I would've thought Maleficent would go for someone she could manipulate easily, but hey, Jafar works too.
Sephiroth being Riku's father was a real jolt. You built it up for that surprise just right. And Bittersweet was true to it's name. I'm assuming it's about Kairi and Sora, right? It's really sad, because that sort of thing happens in real life. Duty and family don't mix well.
Meh. Long updates aren't so bad. You still updated, after all. And even if you don't have anything new for this, then just leave it up. The worst thing authors do is tear down their stories when they're displeased, and you can't even go back to enjoy what they had written. At least I think so.
If you're looking for more ideas, well...hmm...it would be neat to see what happened to Mulan and Tifa after the latter discovered the truth. Stitch aggravating Leon & co. in Hollow Bastion. Uh...I really don't know. But if I think up some more and you still want suggestions, that's okay by me. See ya around!
Splat on the Floor
2006-11-05 . chapter 10
I love this so much, I can't even begin to describe it. All your ideas are unique and original (and well written, which is really hard to find), and you're not afraid to cross boundaries for pairings, plots or characters. I like the Selphie one, where she wants to 'rape' Marluxia, and the one with the Cheshire Cat screwing up the world order. Sparrow vs. Hook was delightful, and so was Heroes and its sequel. Oh goodness, there are way too many to name.
You say we can request themes? Excellent...I'd be thrilled to see a Peter/Alice. I think she might be one to actually stay in Neverland. Aladdin/Somebody besides Jasmine would be cool. And I've always wondered what would happen if Sora, after all the adventures, returned to a normal life. Which is promptly interrupted by one or more of his bizarre friends showing up in need of help.
Jack Skellington: Hey, Sora!
Sora's Mom: HOLY CRAP!!(tries to beat Jack with a vacuum cleaner)

You don't have to use them. I'll read whatever you have, because you've come up with fantastic stuff on your own. Keep it up!
Salem Saori
2006-07-20 . chapter 4
More chapters to catch up with is both wonderful and exhausting, but here I be!

1 - And thus the cerberus injoke lives on. Damn dog indeed. This drabble's style is quite the friendly-easy-light hearted but still pointful (*nods* it's the word of the day) one which I can't help but absolutely love, I think you have a serious knack for these. Both Kingdom Hearts und very Alex style. We too have to kick the absolute hell outta that puppy.

2 - I was trying to search for hidden layers of significance in every single word til I remembered what you said there yesterday. Will have to hold on but the part I understood (*snort*) was sweet anyway.

3 - Very in character for both of them, and Cloud too, truly and wholeheartedly being one fucking pain. He doesn't know how to cope with his feelings for Aerith, so he tries to avoid Tifa knowing he'll never feel the same. Culprit. Leon though seems to be learning something from this and they both just found someone to share and eventually get over their pain with. This could very easily be continuous with the earlier pairings und well... Little does Cloud know Aerith's just eventually gonna leave him for Yuffie :D

4 - So now he leaves her? BAD CLOUD! TO YOUR ROOM!... again. Aww why do ja do this. See neither Tifa and Aerith are going to be happy and it's all because of him. I just want to prod him to a corner and tell him to go and angst somewhere else while the girls have fun.

5 - Ah! He didn't die! I remember this now, the brilliantESHT idea ever. More series-like drabbles, it seems. Tidus in the Land of Dragons is something I wouldn't have imagined but it seems strangely fitting, and yknow a serious story could come out of this idea. But the swell drabbles are just as awesome, and it's quite in character for Tidus too all energetic and wee. Love him to bits. But I dun get the part about it all being familiar...

6 - E! Selphie! Seeing her again so would be any fangirl's dream! She wants to be an hero too? That's too effin cute. Her fighting with nunchakus is something which should definitely find itself being done. And you aced Phil too, all skeptical and prodding around. *squee!*

7 - So very true. So very, very true. So very happening and I kill anybody who dares to think otherwise. I'm the nuber one fan of this idea UND it shall remain as one of the bestest and most possible concepts of the KH-esque variety ever, just cause... all the times I've said "I can see this happening", scratch them out in favor of this. I seriously feel like reading this one over and over again. In fact that's what Salem's gunna find herself doing.

8 - Oh haha I hate you now. For taking a character I was so utterly indifferent to like Leon, making me absolutely fall head to toe in love, and making he be even more awesome with each of your drabbles about him. It's actually quite cynical of him, and Cid's "bZUH?!" ness... wonderful.

9 - I think...I think even though I don't know the character but...I might just have gotten it. She is missing something dearly but she can't make it real. Instant sympathy won for the character.

10 - Good question, why does he? Oddly I'd have expected to see Sora dreaming that on a first thought, but now that I think of it being all hung over his friend is more Riku's style. Hope it doesn't bother you that I point this out now but it's "remind" though :)

kthx for being all aces and wee. And since I ran out of things to say here except you're putting a lot of energies into this and it damn right well shows, so love the fanfic to bits. Keep the wonderful job up.

~Salem Saori
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