Wow what an amazing tale. Fantastically dark (almost to the point of scariness) and amazingly erotic scenes. I really hope none of this is based on real events...

wow! kind of sick but really good!

Lovely. All of it. I was a tad peeved about the comma placement--sorry, I forgot where it was--but other than that, it was awesome. I really don't remark much on the writing styles and all, but your fic was so brilliant, I found no errors in it.

Beautiful description; vividly phrased. You kept Willy Wonka very much in character.. as for Charlie, well, it was pretty much in character too, considering the fact that Willy molded him into that specific person.

I have to say it again: brilliant. This is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. Thank you.

Oh, wow...
Extra love is given for this story.
I do like the way it was ended...

Brilliant story. I like your dialogue for Willy it's delightfully quirky, you also have a good use of detail - I can picture everything going on (cloths, setting, action etc).

Oh... Wow. Just wow. This is so dark, and sick and twisted- but I like it! I still feel a little sorry for Sebastian though, I don't think I'd like to live at the chocolate factory after having those things done to me... O.O Perhaps he got addicted to Wonka though, eh?

That story was, in a word, delicious :D
Wonderfully dark and rich (like chocolate indeed!).
I adore the style of your writing and can hardly wait to read more :)

O_O

Uh...wow. Aside from that, I must say that you are a very telented writer. Good grammar, no spelling errors - good for you! I must say that you have one sick, sadistic, and very...creative mind (goth ** Willy Wonka?!?!?!? ok...) But I'm not knocking it, heavens no! Keep up the good work!
- Doofus96
(A still slightly stunned Doofus96, who's getting over the schock of what she just read)

You turned sick into cute and then back again. Woah! That was really good.

But maybe you should try some way to more easily describe what the characters are wearing. And that's me being extremely nit-picky.

Other than that, it was really good and I look forward to reading more of your stuff!

That. Was. Sick. I'm in love.

Yep, just torture Charlie some. Always a good move, friend.

This was very interesting... very unexpected ending, too. I liked it. I would have never imagined Wonka being so... cruel to a child, but you still pulled off his personality (which is very hard). Thumbs up!

Bageez I'm going to pass out, it's 4 am...Damn you and your good writting you sucked me in. I love this fanfic! -Adds to favorites- now i'm going to pass out...night ^_^

Really... I don't know how to said this...

YOUR FIC IS THE MOST FANTASTIC THING EVER!

Really, I love it! Is dark, and sometimes scary, but that's a part of it! And the way you write Wonka and Charlie is so close to the characters that scares me! (In a good way, obviusly!)

It's fantastic!! I can't belive someone as good as you exist!

F-A-N-T-A-S-T-I-C-!

Really, I love it! Its one of the best Charlie/Willy fic in the whole world!!

Love ya!

PD: Sorry for the grammar errors, but I don't speack english all the time (actually, I'm just learning it XD) but, by the way, amaizing fic!

im sorry this you are a really good writer but I can't finish it...it makes absolutely no sense watsoever, sorry, you're good, no denying that, but this fic's just...weird