No matter how many times I read this fic I always find something that I missed or I did not remember from the last time. It was wonderfully put together. The script flowed easily through my mind's eye. That was delectable.

Very dark...as well as brilliant!

Wow...Great poem!

Wow...that was creepy, yet beautifully written. I loved it.

VERY RHYMEY!

^_^ I liked it! Made me feel like I was in a demented kindergaden class! And it's very catchy...Especially that “Oh, but wait it only gets better, For my door you see is actually a giant paper shredder!” part...don't know why but I love that line b/c I wasn't expecting it!

You are a wondeful writer. I've read your other stories (even the ones on but for some reason I decided to review this fic! I think the rhyming hypnotized me... *begins to roll around the floor*

KEEP WRITING! You have a wonderful talent! Do not waste it!

~Le Fantome Etoile~

I was reading and my first guess was that it was Mike TeeVee. Reading further, I decided it was Charlie. Scrolling down to enjoy the end, I see my first guess guest once again! But whoah. That was really good. And it sure IS ryhming!^_^

But I can't believe Charlie and Willy didn't bother to kill! O_O

^_^