~sigh~ finally caught up...what was that line again...oh yea. GOOD MORNING STARSHINE THE EARTH SAYS HELLO! sorry thats my favorite Willy Wonka...anyway your story is freakin' amazing I love every part of it

Just started this a few days ago, and I'm now left at this ending after reading straight through all 24 parts. I'm anxious to see the rest.

absolutely brilliant! this is only the 2nd chapter and i have already fallen in love with your style of writing :D.I'm already thinking you deserve gillions of reviews for this piece of work. I especially liked that u actually dived into Willy's thoughts (very few dare to venture there) and you are pulling it off with a flair :). I'm seeing that you haven't updated for about a year now but hopefully by the time i read the latest chapter you will then :D

Ah please update this! It's been so long, and I'm really enjoying it.

By the way, it's Larkie-star on deviantart. Do you remember me? I faved and commented on some of your stuff which I love.

Wonderful story~~



'nuff said...

I love this story! Do you plan on finishing this story? I really hope so!

I love this story! Do you plan on finishing this story? I really hope so!

Oh, this is absolutely amazing. Simply fantastic. The way the story progresses, and how Charlie and Willy's relationship grows and changes and the family's reactions, and then the whole bit about Willy's past...

Please don't just leave this hanging! It's too good to not get a proper ending! I've spent all my free time the last two days reading this, and I've been so sucked into the story, I can't bear it if it just gets left like this!

This is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. I love the way you are exploring eromenos/erastes relationships, and the paganism is just fascinating! I never knew that they did the older man/younger boy in Japan though (I did know homosexuality was common, but not that specific type, I thought it was more between warriors. ya learn something new every day). This story, I just can't get it out of my head! I read it like five days ago, and I'm still trying to find a story to match it, and I can't. You've started an addiction, I hope you know, lol. I just love your Wonka, he is so great, cheerful at times, and dark at times, it's just wonderful! I really wish you would update soon pretty please? Please don't abandon this story, it's really well written, the themes explored are so fascinating, please update soon! I want to see how the Whangdoodles are gonna rip the evil candymakers apart(if that's what you had planned, of course). I'm gonna go reread the story now.

Waiting SO anxiously for the next chapter! Please come out with it soon, find the time somehow, I beg of you!
You're a genius.

Wow. It's just amazing. I couldn't stop reading it (it's a bit long and I had to read slowly because english isn't my language (I'm french) so it takes me a little time). I can tell you that I was like hypnotized!
This is actually one of the best stories I've ever read. It's very well written, and I can just keep my eyes wide open while reading your fiction. And the characterization is absolutely awesome.

I hope you'll update it (know it's not easy)
And thanks a lot for all these "author's notes" you leave behind you, because it's such interesting! I can't go to another chapter without reading your notes, in fact.

ALL this fiction is amazing. Really, thank you, you make me leave reality with this! I take my hat off to all this wonderful work. From A to Z. Research, ect.

(and sorry, I know this review isn't very good, but, err... argh, I'll do a better one next time, I promise! And without errors, too... Hee-hee.)

Wow- this is really well written. I love the characterization, and the implication that Wonka is some sort of Celt-based pagan. (Or, I can assume that's what the reference was.)

Do you think you might post an alternate version of this, without chan? It'd expand your readership exponentially.

please please update!! im begging you! all of my friends are reading your story(thanks to maw) and you have inspired me to be willy wonka for halloween and if you leve me hanging with charly being kidnaped its going to be so sad and horrible! i understand about real life but you havent updated sence november! and its driving me crazy!!
-your ever loyal fan
zeratera
please update!

Loving it! I can't wait to read the rest!

omg omg its amazing! a on like ch 16 i had to leve for two days and your story was practuraly all that i could think about! i hope you add more soon i am hangin onyour every word! and it gave me an excuse to eat chocolet try it it makes the story even better if you eat chocolte wile reading it lol it amazing! i love it!!