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Very nice story! Can't wait to see what will happen!
I especially like the interactions between Kimberly and Jim and Tim, so have more of that in the next chapters lol!

Your story is great in one word, the new kim is cool (she is not a cheerleader XD) and your way of arrange the alter world is very good written. This story is all: cute, funny and interesting. The chapter with little shego and little kim/ron is so sweet, the new world is more logic in some things too.

Thanks for your update I did read it for first time a year ago but I hadnt leave a review, I thought that the story never would be updated anyway but here you are. Your FF is between my favorites kim possible`s FFs because very few are so good written continue like that and although you need years for an update I will read then or I hope because you never know I can die tomorrow ^_^;

see you

Dear Chronos the Cat

Another great update. The quality is as good as the pervious chapters.

The characters are in character (including the alternate timeline versions, but lets not discuss the technicality and details)

The scenes of the Past flow very well; similar but different from the Movie. Everyone was in character and was done well.

The parts with Juvenated Kim dealing with things were interesting, dealing with being small, not having her old life, and possibly starting a new one.

The part with Kim trying to get in school was good. The part with alternate timeline Monque was emotional.

The eat-out with Kim and the others was amusing.

The workout among Kim and Shego was interesting.

And the part with Kim wanting to blame someone for what happen was great too.

The ending was an interesting cliffhanger. I wonder who the man is and that version of Monkey Fist are up to.

The wholesome standards are high. Nothing is offensive. Thanks for using slang rather then cussing.

I hope this review brightens your day. God bless.


Data Seeker

Dear Chronos the Cat

It was nice of you to finally update. It’s been a long time.

The quality is about as good as the pervious chapters.

The parts featuring Kim (in a child’s body) trapped in an alternate timeline were amusing, had great interactions among the characters, dialog and humor. I feel sorry for poor Kimmie. I wonder how she’ll get out of it.

The past scenes (similar to the scenes from the original Sitch in Time) featuring alternate Kim and alternate Ron and Shego as preteens and the turning point were good too. Everyone was in character and it flowed nicely.

This is what I think of the wholesome standards. First I want to thank you for removing the foul language in the past chapters.

As for the lesbian references, I didn’t like them; though since you were vague and (as you put it) left Kim and Shego’s relationship up to the opinion of the reader, I won’t make a big deal about it. I always like to consider Kim and Shego having the potential to be close friends, if they stopped hating each-other.
Now for the record, I don’t hate homosexuals. I may not approve of their lifestyle, but they have rights too; a right to live, right to get a job and go to school, and stuff like that.

I hope this review brightens your day. God bless.


Data Seeker

OMG...this is so fricking cute. And Lil Shego dealing iwht Kim and Ron is wonderful. Nicely done.

Wow, this is really good. I love the premise and I love even more where you've taken the story. I hope to see more soon.

“making money through time-travel” would eventually loose its' thrill too P: lose

Do you know how much business we'd loose if P: lose

Glad to see this story back again.

Please make this a KIGO, see http : // home . comcast . net / ~ nekohibik i / cokas / cokas . htm .

Just an idle remark that I doubt you'll see, but I just wanted to comment I found this story rather charming and I'm sad to see it has gone so long without an update.

aw...I love this story so far and i really hope you update it soon. It's a great way to see how things would have turned out even though sometimes it's kind of comfusing to have two of the same people in the same timeline XP Wonderful job so far on the story.
Please update ^.^

~Mizuki Ai

awesomeness! so paradioxial, I love it!

Dear Chronos the Cat

Another very creative chapter; has good exchanges, humor, emotion, and suspense; I am not sure how this time mess will be fixed; though my stress level has somewhat gone done since I read chapter 3.

Interesting how juvenated kim is interacting with her parents, Ron, Shego and her alternate time version self, (who has moral issues). Little Kim is very cute.

The wholesome standards are good this time.
The langauage is clean; slang like heck or darn are OK.
No suggestively offensive materail.
No extrem violence, or any other vile content.

I hope this reveiw has a good influence on you. Curious; when will you update the next chapter? I am interested on how this story turns out. If you like, I can try to come up with suggestions for you on how do proceed. I hope to get a reply from you. God bless.


Data Seeker

Dear Chronos the Cat

Another very creative chapter; full of emotion; has good exchanges, a few good gags, and major suspense.

I wonder how or if the mess left by the time travel is fixable; or if Kim will have to manage in this alternate timeline.

This is what I think of the wholesome standards.

Except for five cuss words; the langauge is clean. Please remove the bad words
Certain situations are handled well and don't trigger bad thoughts when I read them.

I hope this review has as a good influence on you. I will send you another review soon. God bless.

Data Seeker