when are you going to finnish this story soon i hoop

Where oh where is the next chapter...don't make me beg. Oh okay I'm going to anyway, Post next chapter please! Ok begging might work but bribary is better...I'll give you a cookie if you post the next chapter.

This is a good story. I really like it a lot. Yeah the plot was some what perdictable but i loved how you wrote Janeway. Can't wait to read the rest and part two.

I agree that it would have been nice to learn more about what happened with the rescue, but as long as we eventually find out what happened.

I was very happy to see the new chapter and am looking forward to the next! Please don't let it take as long! ;)

Wow, you definitely reworked chapter 16, didn't you? (I had to go back and read it again, it's been so long :P) It was well worth the second reading, too. As for this last chapter... I loved it! Chakotay's grief, and guilt, coupled with Janeway's usual guilt... perfect. Spot-on character-wise. And at this point, I'm completely ok if Justin gets her, he's a stand-up kind of guy!
What happened to Janeway? I want to spend time complimenting this piece... But you're killing us! WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER ALREADY! :)

I'm sorry but I was a bit disappointed. The ending to the previous chapter was filled with so much drama and angst that I was waiting (patiently)for this chapter. But there was no dramatic rescue, no critical life threatening situation described in sick bay. I read Chakotay watched but he he should have stayed by her side til awakening. I thought she was feverish? I am anxious for the flashbacks you said were coming...
Good luck

I like the flashbacks...they add to the story and keep it interesting.
Do I have to tell you how much I love this?! YOu really should know already *grin*. Great work!

yay! an update! i can't wait to see what happens next! i love this story!

waiting patiently for the next chapter! (not! i meant to say impatiently! hint hint!)

only joking. its worth the wait.

x

VERY GOOD! KEEP GOING!

I just read you're story so far, it is great. We get a look at some of Janeways past. You have done a wonderful job. I can't wait for more. Edwina

Fantastic story, easy to follow, very well detailed, however a few spelling mistakes (but that's just me lol)

Looking forward to see how it concludes! (which better not be another year down the road :P)

Hey Emily, me again...I just reread chapter one and I wondered if you are going to refer to Chackotays vision again...?!?

WOW!THE SUSPENCE WAS KILLING ME. I DISAGREE WITH KJ YELLING FOR JUSTIN TO HELP HER BUT WHO KNOWS? UNDER THOSE CIRCUMSTANCES (FEVER, FEAR, EXHAUSTION,ETC) SHE MIGHT BE THINKING OF HER JUSTIN, NOT CREWMAN MATHERS. PLEASE HURRY, I REALLY ENJOYED THE STORY SO FAR.

You capture the mood so well and it is strange that it's been a year. Please update before school starts again and your mind returns to academics. Good job:)
Lizzie

Aww come on!! You can't leave us hanging there like that!! Its too mean!! Please please update soon!!
Thanks for writing!
Nikki