hum...i dont get it either...

The story is good, as always. It wasn't good as I expected though. The tragedy was lost in all the poetics. Readers would get confused by the somehow chaotic progression of events. It could use a little more editing. All in all, I'd give it an 8 out of ten.

I am amazed and disgusted all at once. It is frightfully overwhelming for me to read a SasuSaku fic and not throw up. I must be tired. Must be...
Critic

Well, SasuSaku isn't that bad... -gets hit with a frying pan- ...Okay, maybe SOMEpeople can't stand it... -rotten tomatoes- ...but... well, I have nothing to prove, huh? XD

Movin' on! I LOVE this fic, even though it DID confuse me a bit. Very desciptive, too! I like the simile-like... STUFF. Meh, I suck a reviewing...

very nice

i wasn't confused until i read your AN at the bottom, so thanks for that...

how can you not like this pairing? i will accept that in the anime/manga it will NEVER happen, but they're just so good to write about.

This is good! You did a really good job of writing this pair and I know that's not an easy feat. Definate fav!