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anja 2008-08-13 ch 30, anon.	abuseI absolutly love this story. It is definitly my favorite jack/cloe story.
EJ 2008-07-30 ch 30, anon.	abuseI can't recall if this epilogue was up before, but I have a hunch it was - can I ask why the apparent update on 22/7? Eagerly awaiting more of From The Beginning This Was My End :).
kellethMetheus 2008-05-21 ch 30,	abuseI finished it and really enjoyed the story my only problem was that I kept picturing Chloe's sister as a black woman. I don't know why that was how I kept seeing her in my mind. A great job all around though. I hope to see that you have written more in the future. Kelli
kellethMetheus 2008-05-16 ch 20,	abuseI am really enjoying your story. There is also some run on sentences in the early chapters. I see them because I do the same thing. Also you should change the status to complete. I don't read any stories that aren't done and I set the search engine that way. I only found you story when I found a list of winners on some website. I have come close to crying through parts of your story. I can't wait to finish it. I will let you know what I think at the end. I hope you write more. Kelli
Wrinkled Fabric 2007-08-01 ch 30,	abuseDamn. I mean... wow. I actually can not think of the words to describe my love for this story. I have never read something so amazing - not fanfiction or otherwise. I don't think I've ever read a 24 fic that has written Jack and Chloe so so well. Jack had been tortured for months, so there was a significant difference in him, and yet you still managed to write our Jack Bauer. It was so so perfect. Your OCs were fantastic too - they had their own personalities and traits. Honestly, I prefer this to the actual Series 6. I could go on and on, but since I've actually called in sick yesterday to read this, I figured I better get to work today.
reagansid 2007-06-12 ch 30,	abuseI loved this story! I probably won't have a job tomorrow since I spent all day reading; I couldn't make myself stop.
Anonymous 2007-05-12 ch 30, anon.	abuseI just finished The Constant and I am completely speechless. This is one of the most amazing stories I have read in a very long time. Even if I didn't know the characters, I am certain I would have been drawn in by the very dimensional characters you wrote into the story. Not one element was left untouched and all loose threads that are usually left hanging in the TV series were neatly and lovingly tied as one would a gift. Given the dire turn in the storyline of Day 6, it seems that the writers of the series jumped ship when the natural coarse of events would have been to include such an amazing and dynamic character as Chloe O'Brien. You have done an amazing job with this story. And no matter what the writers at the series decide shall be the characters fate, I will hold this one dearer to my heart. Thank you.
Anon 2007-05-11 ch 30, anon.	abuseUh... Sorry, I've been rendered completely speechless by this amazing labor of love. I stumbled across this yesterday at a different site, found it here where the formatting made it easier to read, and could hardly do anything else until I finished. I really don't know what to say; this is the most remarkable piece of writing I've encountered anywhere for quite a while, so raw, so tender. You had the patience and care to actually make Jack and Chloe as a couple not only right and appropriate but inevitable, something I haven't really seen before. And while I like (at least Season 5) Audrey on the show, you handled her appropriately and logically given how her character was written in S4 and S5. I think your story will replace the 'real' Season 6 in my mind as a conclusion that is more fitting, more intriguing, and on a vastly superior level of coherence, intelligence, sophistication and subtlety. I can't really believe that I am writing all this about a work of fan fiction, as the genre is by definition derivative and by association... hmm... shall we say... of uneven quality, but that is the beauty of your work; I forgot what it is, and am now slightly embarrassed to even mention the show in relation to your work. This story was compelling and beautiful and truly original in so many ways. Really, that's the highest praise I can possibly give. I'd like to write you something a little more coherent and specific and tell you what I liked especially, but right now I just want to relish this story and the world you created. I'm not ready to part with your Jack and Chloe just yet. Thank you for sharing this journey with us. I'm still awestruck...
Hanz the Bunny 2007-05-05 ch 30, anon.	abuseokay, wow. i mean this story was...wow...amazingly written, all the characters were acurate, i mean...it was so god! wonderful wonderful job! (nobody could pull me off the computer until i was done reading, lol) one question: do u have a thing for green? i just noticed that u have that color alot. just curious. ahh! loved this fic so much!
Scifi-warper 2007-04-28 ch 13,	abusePhew. Disaster overted. I'm so glad Jack's getting back to being himself. I wonder how Kim's gonna handle what happened. I'm am starting to really love Winters. Her last name fits so well, especially in regards to her dealing with Audrey. I cracked up the line, "My normal rate is $400 dollars an hour". So funny. Great chapter, I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Scifi-warper 2007-04-28 ch 12,	abuseAw. I like Cassie. yep, she's definitely Chloe's sister. LOL. That was nasty of her with the Audrey thing. But I guess it's kind of deserved. Yeah, Jack's slowly coming back!
Scifi-warper 2007-04-28 ch 11,	abuseNice to know that all the...er, functions work properly now. That had to be a bit of a shock to Chloe there. Interesting look into Jack's life when Kim was little. I would have never thought of Kim singing him back to sleep as a little kid, and yet it makes sense. It certainly makes for a very sweet mental image.
Scifi-warper 2007-04-28 ch 10,	abuseWow. just wow. Poor Jack. I just want to give him a big hug and help Chloe lock him away from all the bad stuff. And poor Chloe. That really, really sucks having to hear what happened to her best friend from his own voice. At least now she knows what to try and avoid. Great job describing their bond with how Chloe promised she would have explained his choice to Kim. Very deep. As to Audrey. again, grr. Honestly, she's not worth protecting in my opinion. I love how Winters handles her.
Scifi-warper 2007-04-28 ch 9,	abuseGrr Audrey! Why the heck would someone do that?! And to Jack? I love how Winters handled it. Great job having the Doc hold of Buchanan. Breathe, dude, breathe! Yeah Chloe. I love how she keeps promising to mess up and when she does, tries to make it right and prevent other mess ups. Great last line. "Okay, no more feeling that safe around me. I am still doing the cooking, remember?".
Scifi-warper 2007-04-28 ch 8,	abuseAwesome chapter. Go Martha Logan! That was really really sweet. Is it bad I found the image of Jack blushing while naked under the towel kind of funny but still sweet? Loved Martha's "Don't even bother..." speech. Great job using her to bring Jack over a hard curve. That was scary with the whole bath thing. You had me literally screaming at the computer screen for Chloe not to leave the minute Jack started stumbling on what to say. Again, great chapter. I love the whole "secrecy" behind it!

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