i love this fic and keep it up. can't wait for the next update and well check out one of my fic i published and tell me what you thnk
good work with the fic and all.
love it.

good story hope to read more chapters soon

WTF?

dude... you should really let go to japanese words.

it's okay to use -san, -shan, -sama, -sensei, hokage, konoha, jutsu names(though, personally, i prefer them in English)... and so on ... but when you start translating whole sentences... it turns annoying. I know a bit of Japanese and i get annoyed, but what about people who don't know any?

Shine, Sono, daijobu ...should be translated.

The one thing that irritated me to no end was:
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"HAI! Kare wa ore o nikimasen! Kyuubi o nikimu, ahou!" Naruto smirked as Mizuki paled, "ore wa Kyuubi no Kitsune no Jinchuukiri da!" (YES! He doesn't hate me! He hates the Kyuubi, moron! I'm the vessel for the Ninetailed fox!"
]END QUOTE
here, i really don't understand why you even put the Japanese sentences.

well done on all chapters could really do with seein a conclusin on the story basis continue the good work

love all chapters dude love all aspects that have been put in place an some of the people i know who read it dont know that futon rasengan is the name for rasen shuriken so please put in so they can get it

well i really much don't know about review but honestly this story is very good and i don't know timing of your updation of your story but i am waiting for next chapter.the every aspect of story has been described vary well especially killing orochimaru and saving sasuke from becoming bad person.but itachi was good at heart in real story and only think good of village and sasuke.it might have shown in the story.

update or perish peon

Man this story is so good and you stop and gave it to someone who dosent even update. Man i wish i could have ADOPTED this story instead of LightYagami25 especially since Kurenai/Naruto parings are my fav.

Heumm... i think you forget Shikamaru...

Well maybe you can finish it some day as this is a very good story. It was a lot different that I have seen before.

different but nicely done story.. Though I am still waiting for what happens when Leader and Naruto meats head on!

Keep it coming :)

u know u should find someone to photo shop the whisker marks n sharingan onto the yondaime so u can have a pic of the naruto of the future lolz

absolutely loved the story up to this point i agree with the whole naruto a little too powerful but its still great to see him whoop some **.hopefully this story will continue i'd like to see what happens and the only thing i'd like to see is not as much japanese love the origality but it gets a little hard to get some things sometimes and also i don't know how far the whole demon thing will trail off but hopefully not too much i've been dying to see what happens with the akatsuki maybe you could have them learn a few new jutsu to better challenge this new invincible Naruto.all in all tho love the story can't wait to see what happens next

I loved this story, but seriously, you only need like a chapter or two to end this. Just have Sasuke get married and have kids, get Naruto's third and possibly fourth kid out and have their kids become friends. You could have Naruto have a boy too, for a change and Sasuke's first born should be a boy, cuz only a boy can get the title 'Head of the Uchiha Clan'. A happy ending.

Man, this is a great fic.
Hope you haven't giving up on it:(