That was . . . amazing! Fabulous job!

Quite angsty, but it had a sort of happy ending...
Nice work.
You're really good add describing emotions =)

This was amazing, full of lots of emotion and passion.
Great work!

Awesome, absolutely awesome, great job!

Oh I love this! It's really, really touching. Beautiful conveyance of Revan's feelings, it all works perfectly. I've read Broken Promises and I've been hooked on all your work since, and I have to say you're an excellent writer.

Your stories have got to be the best KOTOR fics I've yet found. You're a superb writer.

I actually tried to go to Dantooine once after Leviathan. The game doesn't let you, though I wasn't surprised. Though I wish I had the skills needed to put this scene into the game.

I'm looking forward to reading Broken Promises, and anything else you write.

AW
*sniffs and stops crying long enough to review*
That's so sad...
Rev... you seem to be writing sad things lately.
But you're damn good at them, so I won't complain
But speaking from very recent experience, I'm wondering if something happened IRL for you. If so, you have my sympathy, my good wishes, and my hugs-as many as you need, as many as you want. I like giving hugs.
*hugs*
But yeah. Amazing as always, Rev. Keep up the awesomeness

I love it. I absolutely love it. I love Revan's reaction, her feelings, and how Carth came and comforted her... It's perfect. Awsome job.

Wow, very powerful story.

I always wondered what happened to Dantoonie after Saul bragged about it to Carth, Revan and Bastila.

Almost wished Shen and Rahaisha survived by being offworld when the Sith came.

“I… I’ve walked a dead planet before..." - Yeah, I forgot Carth was on Telos after the bombardment.

Good job!

Very nice! The emotions were perfect!

please write more! I realy like this!

WOw... this story is really quite sad. I liked the ending though!! keep up the good work!!

Shady

I like how frank her thoughts were...I always wanted to be able to see Tatooine after the bombing in game...would have been a good cut scene...
nicely done all around

Nicely written. Great job =)

Wow... just... wow. I mean... wow. This is excellent. Definately going down as one of my favorites. I'm actually interested in how you'd do with a one-shot of the cut DSF ending with Carth. Would be interesting reading your take on it.