lol they're all bakas...

Love. I think you did a great job with the characters, showing that Sanzo really does like Goku. Good job. _

Sweet. Although Sanzo was a bit too nice. I swear, that guy doesn't have a soft side. But, if he did, it would be for Goku. Nice job.

interesting thoughts on being alone.

we are, yet we arent. a certain universal truth.

i like the way you treated the characters... although this was more sanzo-goku than the other half...

SO WONDERFUL! I love old Saiyuki stories. ] Probably- No, it IS one of the best FFs I've ever read.

At first I thought it was a bit repetetive, but then I realized that if it were made into manga adaption, that's pretty much how the captioning outside the dialog would go. So, you win for making a one-shot that reads so close to what a transcription of one of the manga back-chapters would be like o.ob This is sad, but you pull the comraderie and absurdity out in the open. Really great.

Wow this is just so wow. It is really good I am really impressed. The entire thing just seemed so right and just perfect! You are an amazing writer and it shows. Good story I love this!

Hah, very nice. I love the interaction between Goku and Sanzo, you've gotten it perfectly. Especially the "You're snoring!" "Eh? I didn't hear anything." You made me laugh. Thank you.

You are awesome! *bows* You make Sanzo, Sanzo and Goku, Goku and its wow!

Really enjoyed this. Especially the do x and you die part! XD

now to tackle all the saiyuki ones! a brilliant start. love your sanzo. who cares if it was written years before i'd even heard of these guys!

LOL, great one-shot!

m(_ _)m *bows* you're a genius. will probably spend the whole night reading all your fics and reviewing _

*sob sob*

That. Was. The. Best. Saiyuki. Fic. I've. Read. In. A. Long. Long. Time.

That was so sweet! and sad!

lovely lovely fic

write more like that, please

yahoy! that's it man.. i'm gonna stalk your lj for your fics. the characters are wonderfully IC, and even though i don't lean towards the 39 part of the sanzo-ikkou, goku and his 'i don't want to be alone' and sanzo's being-nice-in-typical-gruff-sanzo-fashion is just so squee worthy. *grins* i can only wish to be like you.

Moon Revenge

Good story. And I don't even usually tend towards Sanzo/Goku...