lol, this was so cute! good job! love from-writerchick13

Hah!

'Knickers' is so going to be my new swear word.

This is awesome. My one comment would be two watch out with your apostrophes and quotation marks. It's a little confusing when 'this' indicates someone talking and an onomatopoeic word (like 'thump').

Cheers, and keep writing! I love your work!

I want to have a birthday surprise too, with a Sirius on top, please! Great story! Super funny! Remus is so weak against his friends!

haha, i love it!

hahahaha that was awsome!

hm srry im kinda confused; i dont get the part about the pinik banners and dumbledore in a yellow cloak...

but great story! i love ur portayal of remus; nice job!

Oh j'aime beaucoup!

(I'm translating chapter ten...)

Tee hee! That was very cute. James and Sirius and Remus when they were young... oh god. Drooling and fangirling ensues.

I've always wondered what bedpans are. Presumably, pans where mattresses are kept, but... are they used anymore? Hm, such is the mystery of life.

Hm... I got kind of confused. But I enjoyed it. Good job :) I loved reading how they got Remus to participate.

Still working on reading all of your stuff.

Love,

Monica

haha another cute one-shot! i love these. keep it up!

very funny! not in a patronising condescending manner, just amusingly well written.

peter's sock draw, truly pathetic remus.

*giggles* Oh that is such a lovely short story. It completely brightened my day. _

I luff it. The pink part, which I swear I've read before, and Remus and especially James. I really loved James.

I luff you and miss you terribly.(-is very sorry about disappearing for a month, but had terribly evil exams to write-).

It's a little random, but it's also hilarious! Great job, once more.

aww cute. i like your portrayal of remus, it was very endearing.

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