 CurlyHairedDemon 2009-07-31 . chapter 18D that last one... that last one just about killed me |
 chiharu-tanaka 2009-03-31 . chapter 1OMG the last one pwned me! Amazing job in writing up 50 wonderful sentences for KiraHina! :D I especially enjoyed the last one, and the one where Kira gets a Bankai. |
 spero spiro 2008-11-10 . chapter 1The 1sentence challenge is one of my favorites on LJ, and this is a really delightful take on it. :) Kira is so awkward, and Hinamori is so oblivious... but it's *them*, and it's wonderful. |
 wthkate 2007-08-16 . chapter 1OMG! I love this SOO much! ^^
Please Keep writing! :D |
 freakwriterCHM 2007-08-09 . chapter 1This was extremely good, I'm adding it to favs... wow, you wrote such a good fic... I'm amazed by this. Well done! I love this pairing... |
 Mimiru.hack 2007-05-27 . chapter 1This story was so good! I liked the way you wrote all the different pieces. I'd like to use these as a complete story one day(if that's all right). |
 Riu Lin 2007-01-13 . chapter 1Wow. xD I loved how you kept the flow of your sentences- they were so catchy and romantic at the same time (of course, in some, hilarious). So fresh they are!
Ahh, you really must write more Kira/Hinamori fanfiction, Lucinda. ;_; I'm DYING for nice, good, well-written, flowy Kira/Hinamori fics. |
 the.maljax.is.me 2006-12-24 . chapter 1Every single line captures these two so perfectly.
And I'm the one of the ten people in the world who love this pairing to death but that's okay! |
 Modular Blues 2006-08-19 . chapter 1The vignette style is refreshing, and I can totally see how the characters might behave under certain situations :-) Great job filling in the emotive aspects of the series. |
 Swimming Bird II 2006-07-06 . chapter 1 Argh! more! more! More kiraHina!
I love this! I LOve this!
Incredible! This is fic is so beautiful! |
 Youkai Hime90 2006-07-02 . chapter 1Even though I've only started watching BLEACH the idea of Kira and Momo as a couple really appeals to me! I've always adored your skills as a writer and each and every sentence was beautiful, heart breaking, and wonderful. My personal favorite? A deadlock between Sorrow and Valiant. Yeah, I'm a sucker for angst. But I also loved the imagery you used in Balloon and Jump. What can I say, I loved them all! ^_^
[favefave] |
 Outsane 2006-07-01 . chapter 1Aww, some were sweet, and some were sad. Very, very good! XD |
 Liz 2006-06-26 . chapter 1 This is really impressive. I`m not even a fan of this pairing, but you managed to put real poetry into some of the verses (particularly Wonder and War). Keep writing, I hope I can keep reading! |