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Reviews for: A Practice in Persistence
CurlyHairedDemon
2009-07-31 . chapter 1
8D that last one... that last one just about killed me
chiharu-tanaka
2009-03-31 . chapter 1
OMG the last one pwned me! Amazing job in writing up 50 wonderful sentences for KiraHina! :D I especially enjoyed the last one, and the one where Kira gets a Bankai.
spero spiro
2008-11-10 . chapter 1
The 1sentence challenge is one of my favorites on LJ, and this is a really delightful take on it. :) Kira is so awkward, and Hinamori is so oblivious... but it's *them*, and it's wonderful.
wthkate
2007-08-16 . chapter 1
OMG! I love this SOO much! ^^
Please Keep writing! :D
freakwriterCHM
2007-08-09 . chapter 1
This was extremely good, I'm adding it to favs... wow, you wrote such a good fic... I'm amazed by this. Well done! I love this pairing...
Mimiru.hack
2007-05-27 . chapter 1
This story was so good! I liked the way you wrote all the different pieces. I'd like to use these as a complete story one day(if that's all right).
Riu Lin
2007-01-13 . chapter 1
Wow. xD I loved how you kept the flow of your sentences- they were so catchy and romantic at the same time (of course, in some, hilarious). So fresh they are!

Ahh, you really must write more Kira/Hinamori fanfiction, Lucinda. ;_; I'm DYING for nice, good, well-written, flowy Kira/Hinamori fics.
the.maljax.is.me
2006-12-24 . chapter 1
Every single line captures these two so perfectly.

And I'm the one of the ten people in the world who love this pairing to death but that's okay!
Modular Blues
2006-08-19 . chapter 1
The vignette style is refreshing, and I can totally see how the characters might behave under certain situations :-) Great job filling in the emotive aspects of the series.
Swimming Bird II
2006-07-06 . chapter 1
Argh! more! more! More kiraHina!

I love this! I LOve this!

Incredible! This is fic is so beautiful!
Youkai Hime90
2006-07-02 . chapter 1
Even though I've only started watching BLEACH the idea of Kira and Momo as a couple really appeals to me! I've always adored your skills as a writer and each and every sentence was beautiful, heart breaking, and wonderful. My personal favorite? A deadlock between Sorrow and Valiant. Yeah, I'm a sucker for angst. But I also loved the imagery you used in Balloon and Jump. What can I say, I loved them all! ^_^

[favefave]
Outsane
2006-07-01 . chapter 1
Aww, some were sweet, and some were sad. Very, very good! XD
Liz
2006-06-26 . chapter 1
This is really impressive. I`m not even a fan of this pairing, but you managed to put real poetry into some of the verses (particularly Wonder and War). Keep writing, I hope I can keep reading!
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