 COOKIEMONSTER0077 5/17/12 . chapter 1Dude. Like... just... wow. I already knew that this would be creepy, I could just feel it, even when I jut read from the beginning. But. This is just... yeesh.
This was brilliantly written, and I love the way you planted that creepy feel to it.
I started reading it, I brushed passed the creepy feeling I got, and just dismissed this as just another reunited SasuSaku fic where they got together all happy n stuff in the end.
Then I read 'reached out and gently closed Sasuke glassy, un-seeing eyes.' and 'where they had found the body stolen from Sasuke's grave'.
And I was all: 0.0 ... wat?
I can really imagine this as a scene in naruto. It gave me the creeps, especially that last sentence. Congrats, cuz I don't get creeped that often! |
 Shiela 5/12/12 . chapter 1 wow, I love the drabbles you make..their melancholy yet beautiful... :)
I totally think that what Sakura-chan did was in character, she just..loves Sasuke-kun too much to let go...
Dammit! Im crying all over the keyboard again! :))) |
 Caramel Life 4/29/12 . chapter 1Fantastic work. |
 anticollision 6/28/11 . chapter 1wow..
i had a feeling that that was going to happen. or, was happening i should say. with sasuke already dead.
your writing style invites the reader in, making them want to read the next little word, the next sentence. it's lovely! |
 red.masenko 2/6/11 . chapter 1I wondered why this story had so many reviews.. Until I read it.
This was amazing. It was truly a beautiful, bittersweet story, with the perfect twist. This is the kind of story that stays in someone's mind for a long time, letting us ponder on the how and the way.
Just beautiful. |
 xlegnAkraDx 12/9/10 . chapter 1Bittersweet, I must admit. I can see this epic story that we call Naruto ending on this note.
Currently, in the show, Sakura is in denial. She's not any stronger, really. She falls apart at the thought of Sasuke gone for good, and this is a good example of it.
This was painful to read, but disturbingly beautiful. Peaceful, too. Thank for sharing this wonderful story that I'm sure is much appreciated by many.
Sincerely,
xlegnAkraDx |
 J'ecris 7/7/10 . chapter 1Wow. What a twisted story! I love it. Its briefness even is amazing and it carries the 'dark' theme very well. Congrats, this is an awesome story. |
 Ahmose Nefertari 6/19/10 . chapter 1Wow...this was outstandingly disturbing...and sad...and yet beautiful. Congrats for this very original plot... |
 MelodysFall 3/31/10 . chapter 1That was shockingly beautiful.
And this is probably one of the best 'Sasuke returns' fic because it's that same cliched plot except 100x more different and unique. I love how you surprised in the end there! Geeze! At first I thought he was just blind but then the grave, the body. I was kind of freaked out. Freaked out because he's dead and freaked out 'cause Sakura dug him out- well. it was implied. but still. Anyways. I was freaked out good. I loved it! |
 Sukisoomph 3/15/10 . chapter 1nice story man... just the last sentence there...
adding it made the whole story have a creepy feel to it, if that was ur intention... you could have used the language beforehand to subtly introduce the creepy vibe... (just the description itself (without giving away the twist)) then when you would reveal the ending it wld be less shocking (in a way)
If you didnt want the creepy twisted sick feeling (not that those vibes arent AWESOME) you cld just remove the last sentence..
just have it be the way that he was dead (not necessarily removed from his grave)
But props for the creativity man. |
 bibsa1 3/14/10 . chapter 1Wow. That was... Wow. I don't even know what to say. For one, I was not expecting that ending at all. It was sad and disturbing, but very good all the same, and I greatly enjoyed it. So much so that I decided I had to review.
bibsa1 |
 TrueHeartsGlow 3/14/10 . chapter 1That was perfectly emotional and divine! Thank you for making me cry with this genious of a story! I loved it to tears-no literally. |
 TillyMe 1/10/10 . chapter 1very uh...Necrophilic? sorta? i hope not...that was very deep though, i loved it!:) |
 KuroAngelique 11/26/09 . chapter 1Ohh I love it. It's so dark and disturbing.
I know that there must be some kind of twist at the end, but a stolen body was an unexpected one.
:D |
 Juniper11 9/20/09 . chapter 1I kind of wish you hadn't put the warning in the summary. It spoils it a tad bit. Nevertheless, I could see clearly the shock on Naruto's face when he saw her with the body.
Wow. |