Why does the phrase tentacle rape come to mind?

Very good...pwease write the leamon! please?

no lemon? gasp! U must write it! Jack gets so little control and it will be fun to see how Chase reacts :) go on.. u no u want to.. :)
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YAY FOR LEMON! ME WANT! I love this idea of Jack on top and Chase... god, I wanna picture of his face when he slowly realized just what was going on. That would have been priceless... XD


...Lemon?!! XD

Aya! So cute. You definetely pull this off, even without the lemon, thouhg I wouldn't mind reading one anyways... (SAY 'HELLO' TO THE BIG HONKING HINT!). So, yes. I faved, too, btw.

-SS

grr write lemon or I swear I will hunt you down, get a personal effect, and plauge your life with voodoo curses! not really but please do anywayz *puppy dog eyes*

i like this a lot, don't you bob? "Shut up Cherry." "I'm sorry..."

*Giggle* Jack's definitively is very, very special ^^

What was that line... "Ultimate Universal Emo-Uke" hahaaha! That's so true! I was laughing way much when reading this. There is absolutely NOTHING wrong with this fic. you are a fantastic writer and you've "proven your own worth" with this. And I love they're playful attitudes. It's all in the characters. and somehow you made them not as OOC as they could've been. Nice.

Whoa! Pretty good for your first. I saw your DA page and you rock at drawing. What a wonderful combo!

HAHAHAHAHAHA! CHASE GETS A PET MONKEY!

Lemon please? This is my favorite slash pairing (not to mention, in my opinion, the only one that works.) I'll be check

Write the lemon scene! yayness! I like most slashy pairings!
Laters.

I bet if the writers of Xiaolin showdown could read this story they`d wish they never made Wuya say that.

Ooh, that's a twist! Now Jack's the one on top! ::starts getting nasty thoughts in her head, but soon after placed them in the back of her head for safekeeping:: I like it. Original. And yes, ME WANT LEMON! ME WANT LEMONY GOODNESS! I wanna see how he did it!

::...and somewhere in her head, her Shoulder Angel and Devil aere duking it out.::

SA: No! Her brain's already half-dead as it is!

SD: I don't give a flying witch about her brain! I want lemons!

Wuya: Shut up. ::floats away::

SA: If you love lemons so much, go suck on one!

SD: Your mother!

SA: ...That is SO old, it's not even funny.

SD: ... ::kicks SA in the shin and runs for the control room::

...Sorry 'bout that. But PLEASE review!