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Cassandra30
2009-10-12 . chapter 1
Most excellent!
Death Marss
2009-09-13 . chapter 1
very good
kat
2009-08-30 . chapter 1
wow you're a microbiology major and yet you still had them giving intravenous injections rather than intramuscular. I hope you aren't pre-med.
also as for picking out the sharpest needles, they would cause the least pain. trying to force a thick, blunt needle through the skin would not only be more painful but take longer.
p.s. i work in a hospital
hypercell
2009-03-09 . chapter 1
That was really good!
silentXcity
2008-11-17 . chapter 1
Severus and needles a great combo and fic, well done :)
Kenaz Slytherin
2008-08-01 . chapter 1
Luv how ur story is going and can't wait to see what happens next.
spinningleaves
2008-02-29 . chapter 1
Very interesting piece. I really like that you recognize that Snape is intelligent enough to realize when he's been wrong instead of yelling like some idiot. Nice work!
supergirl3684
2008-02-06 . chapter 1
that was great!!
CosmicEssence
2007-06-25 . chapter 1
That was awesome! I think you got Snape's character down to a T, though i'm no expert ^__^

Hermione's role was good, and her refusal to tell what she knew was great. Just like Snape said, unbelievable. (in a good way lol). Plus her explanation of what happened...seems to make a whole loada sense. And best of al she uses the Dursleys as incentive to bring Harry around...brilliant.

Oh and of course Harry's reaction, the removing the poisons 'separating them' and with Snape's pov all the way through made it all the more plausible and vaguely amusing.

Then of course, the ending scenes...grinningly good :D there is no other way to describe the feeling from reading that. It stays in character and in tune with the rest of the piece (I think) and yet gives over a feeling of thrill, angst, sadness, elation and amusement all at once.
strawrawbeby
2007-06-24 . chapter 1
nice story
ShadowedHand
2007-04-30 . chapter 1
Well, Snape should be sorry, the jerk!
Lexie Lupin
2007-02-24 . chapter 1
Good story!
morriganscrow
2007-02-06 . chapter 1
Excellent! Great tension and psychology. A fine read.
DeengoBlue
2007-01-01 . chapter 1
Harry's immunity solution seems plausible and quite a suitable reaction to his childhood.
I especially enjoyed your line about Snape's "session of fending off Dumbledore’s lemon sherberts and offers of tea".
PotentialDarkWizard
2006-08-14 . chapter 1
Great story, sounds very in character to me. Snape was so happy about giving Harry needles, Ha! He takes pleasure in the funniest things. The ending was really good, when he said he was sorry. Aw..

.:)PotentialDarkWizard(:.
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