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| StarTraveler 2008-07-25 ch 1,  | abuseloved it |
| OJaganshi 2007-03-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou have such a fantastic way of writing and expressing the strength in their love. You did an amazing job with this one. Please, please, please keep up the gorgeous work. |
| snowlover 2006-12-26 ch 1, | abuseWonderful! You put in many beautiful metaphors and sentences. I love that one: “Do you question whether I love you or not?” “No my Alexander, I only question how much.” It is fantastic! |
| Nimmy II 2006-08-09 ch 1, | abuseGorgeous. I loved how you portrayed Hephaestion as a little insecure and sensitive under his battle scars and unending trust. Because, in all fairness - if Alexander had at least two other lovers then that's exactly how Hephaestion would feel. Wonderfully carried across, and a lovely finish. :) |
| Atsu Tenshi 2006-07-09 ch 1, | abuseI love it very much! ^__^ A very compelling, gripping, and awesome oneshot. Are you planning to write more ATG fic? Because you should, you know. I love the whole plot in this story, Hephaestion assuring himself about the love from Alexander and Alexander proving it. It was very sweet and the ending makes me melt. ::grins:: Write more! XD |
| Baliansword 2006-07-02 ch 1, | abuseA great Hephaestion POV with a vivid description of the events. I definately like the 'restoration' of Alexander and Hephaestion at the end. Cannot wait to hear of more tales from you. ~Baliansword |
| Hikari Schezar 2006-06-28 ch 1, | abuseI love it! It was so sweet and so wonderfull! I really hope you write more Alexander fanfiction, it was amazing! |
| ticopuma 2006-06-28 ch 1, | abuseVery nice! |
| XZanayu 2006-06-24 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful and wonderful! Excellent job! |