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| 101spacemonkey 2008-09-04 ch 10,  | abusei loved the garden theme within the fic loved the fic i almost fell like there should be a sequel... and in a way i feel like dreams and nightmares is like a sequel although it is different form this fic, it has a sort of closure type feel to it |
| 101spacemonkey 2008-09-04 ch 9, | abuseeek, 2 people down at once! ouch... poor danny! and of course jack, they were just getting somewhere |
| 101spacemonkey 2008-09-04 ch 8, | abusehehe hammond knew all along! it was a sort of trap for paul, who will probably now slip away from his escort and head to the hospital |
| 101spacemonkey 2008-09-04 ch 7, | abusei love how sam teamed with jack and teal'c at the end... but now the threats are going to come flying out... the team handled jacks revelation quite well, all things considered it was terrible that paul used daniel against jack! and im off to read more |
| 101spacemonkey 2008-09-04 ch 6, | abuseouch! loved it, and now jack knows! i wonder what was in that file? i have an idea, but do the Drs know everything? so basically daniel loved jack, but gave himself to paul to save jack as he felt his feelings were really only one way and that jack could never love him... i think cant wait for mroe, so off i go to click that little button |
| 101spacemonkey 2008-09-04 ch 5, | abusewow thats all that need to be said... i wonder what will happen now? how much do they know? |
| 101spacemonkey 2008-09-04 ch 4, | abuseyes, it is important that they are still alive. im so happy that sam was suspicious of paul... i wonder what jack will do when he sees him? |
| 101spacemonkey 2008-09-04 ch 3, | abusei really feel for jack! i wondered why it was called an 'attack' i guess it was a personal attack by daniel upon himself, i was just wondering if jack had been disguising it |
| 101spacemonkey 2008-09-04 ch 2, | abuselove the roots analogy! poor danny... im glad jack is there, but if paul is back in town whats going to happen when he hears? and will jack let him near daniel? |
| 101spacemonkey 2008-09-04 ch 1, | abusethe desciptive writing of his feelings and the literary writing about the abuse is so vivid and well done. off to read more |
| bybytte 2007-10-22 ch 10, | abuseThat was sweet ! >_< I loved it ! bisoux |
| 7 League Boots 2007-09-13 ch 10, | abuseHarrowing story told with sensitivity and creativity. Nice work on the characters. My fave scene is when Sam asks if the pictures are real; I thought she'd freak, but instead she smoothly proposed a countermeasure! Team SG1 behind Daniel all the way - excellent. Oh, and the love story with Daniel and Jack touched even this die-hard Sam/Jack shipper. A good tale of hope, love and redemption. Thanks for sharing. |
| TheOneThatIsAddictedToHPfic... 2007-07-20 ch 10, | abuseloved it... |
| kaneda26 2007-01-06 ch 10, | abuseWow! It's beautiful. All the metaphors with roots and nature are beautiful. Sorry, I can't find a other word than beautiful, my english is not very good. When I began to read, I was afraid you make a sad ending. Hopefully, it's not a too dramatic end (my heart can't stand deathfic, too sad), Daniel is alive and I hope Jack and him will be happy together. I really like you writting and I thanks you very much for your story. |
| June 2006-11-17 ch 10, anon. | abuseWow! I really loved this- great work and very strong writing. The Daniel angst is always a plus ;), and the plotline was really original. I hope you'll write something new soon! |