lollies! snape certainly got over that quickly didn't he? he was mad and then does to her what she had blabbed about! lollies, it was cute.

OMG!THE STORY IS SO GREAT! COULD YOU WRITE ANYMORE.

Hilarious!

Ah, best introduction to a fic ever. I bloody swear, I couldn't get past the first five lines for how brilliant they were. The title is quite great, too. *Applauds*

Gonnabe? I love you. In a purely platonic way...but this was hilarious!! I could see you writing this, reading it to Moose, and her trying to steal it and add more and more to it. ^__^

~~FalconsWing (from TFC...^_^)

My eyes are dying on me and I'm still giggling at the silliness and fluffiness of this one-shot. Snape on your street, huh? I can hear the hearts pounding already. :) This was brilliantly written. I can't write humor for my life and admire the ease with which you pull it off. Loved the title.

Hee... excellent ;)

o__o Well usually I hate SSxHG fics... But this one was really amusing :P

haha! that was great! i've been reading ur other fic, antiquity's corollary (which i love by the way! but haven't gotten to chapter 38 yet...), but took a break and decided to read this one! lol! very funny! and sexy at the end! i love your written!

Haha! It's an interesting little one-shot to be sure. No bothersome explanations of how they got together. It's weird (but not bad weird, just interesting weird) for her to be afraid and yet love the sex at the same time. I don't think their relationship is anything more. I think it's funny Severus took her back to punish her too.
Have to say though...the Pomfrey thing was creepy.

Snape is an evil murdering traitor, and you know what? Anyone who thinks he's "awesome" is dangerously unbalanced.
You need psychiatric help before you end up in prison for being such a sadistic psychopath!

wow that was... ok it was WEIRD ! never in my life would i allow snape near Hermione and you know the is sick and wrong

That was defiantly funny and original. Great job and keep up the work.
Angelic~Bladez

Ok... i like it. It was a good one-shot. More story then sex... hell really no sex all story... but hey not bad... keep writting. (maybe not this story or even this catagory but you write fairly well and i'd love to read more)

ha ha ha! very very very funny! i really liked it !