It takes a skilled author to write a good yaoi story.

It takes an amazing author to write a good Kingdom Hearts yaoi.

It takes an extraordinary author to write a good Roxas and Axel yaoi.

You, my friend, have accomplished all of these. I was crying at the end of Chapter 33, right before the epilogue. If it weren't for everyone in my house being asleep, I'd be yelling NO NO NO NO NO NO NO! right about now. The part with Larxene at the end was... grrrrrrr I wanted to reach into the story and strangle her. THAT SHOULD BE ROXAS SITTING NEXT TO HIM. NOT LARXENE! Just her personality made me want to strangle her.

To be honest with you, I wasn't sure if I was going to like it or not. This is the 1st yaoi that I've ever really read. But I just couldn't stop reading it! The cliffhangers at the end of each chapter made me keep going. I was crushed when I discovered that fanfiction.net is blocked at my school. I just had to know what happened next!

I love, love, love, love, love, love, love, love, love this story ! Nyaaa ! I cannot explain how much I am in love with this story ahaha . It made me laugh, it made me cry.. Alot.. . But in a good way :] And has inspired me to write my own stories too . Even know they will not even come close to how AMAZING this story is ! xDDD But yes, I am so happy from this story, ahahaha, I read it in a day . Can't wait to read the next one , looking forward to it :D I just want to hug Axel all the time, whenever he's feeling sad just attack hug him . -squeezes pillow in my arms- But I digress.. Great story ! My favourite Akuroku fan fiction by far ! .

love it

LOL! sora tought me a new way too cheat

great story so far but its like really late so i'm gnna read more tmro

Ughh No it ended at a sad note sort of... well good thing theres a sequel!

I'm enjoying the fluffies in this story. :P Anyway... I CANT BELIEVE I TURNED EMO FOR ROXY AND HE'S NOT EVEN DEAD! But still- I'M SO HAPPY! -cries into my shirt- Ah, well, i love him. 3

I want plushies to hug now... and U called Axel "Alex" on accident- I hope it was a typo cuz I hate that name on a guy. -.-

YAY FOR YAOI!

OMG OMG OMG ROXY GOT SHOT! -suddenly goes emo- Roxas... wanna die with you... -slits wrists and doesn't die- WTH? Oh, i used a plastic knife...

You should do like a popularity poll for our favorite characters. :3 I VOTE DEMYX ALL THE FREAKING WAY! (I know he's, like, a nerd, but still i want to pet his faux-hawk) -drools on keyboard- But still, my sister makes fn of him becuase his sitar is shaped like... well, you know. XD

I wanna grind with Demyx. X3

Lemme guess... Marly raped Olette? D:

Why is it i feel like kissing when they're kissing? xD

Uhm. Idk what to say to this one... o.O

In a word Sensual? xD

wonder if your dad yelled at you when he read this... cuz mine would. :P

You should totally put fanart in the story! It'll be alot more... nteresting. :3

NOOOO! We love longer chapters! Make 'em as long as humanely(or is it humanly?) possible, 'kay?