 Way2DawnWielder 2009-11-08 . chapter 1AWESOME story. I loved it and I want to go back and read it again. |
 DeNiSaY60 2009-10-14 . chapter 33Aww ANGST!! XD
Wanna... read...sequel.. but.. school. -collapses- |
 DeNiSaY60 2009-10-12 . chapter 30Ahaha, little hints of Zemyx? Even if it wasnt... I saw it 8D |
 DeNiSaY60 2009-10-12 . chapter 29D8 Why make Zexy die? HE DIDNT DO ANYTHING?! D: |
 DeNiSaY60 2009-10-12 . chapter 27Wah, cliffhangy D8 |
 DeNiSaY60 2009-10-11 . chapter 22I thought the 'busted' meant that Axel's dad came home and saw Roxy and all that shizz xD
BAD MARLY! |
 DeNiSaY60 2009-10-11 . chapter 21M, hot make-out session 8D |
 DeNiSaY60 2009-10-09 . chapter 8Ohohohho, the ending was very yaoi-full :D |
 DeNiSaY60 2009-10-09 . chapter 5Hehe, this chapter was so awkward yet cute at the same time :D |
 Araea Swiftwind 2009-09-09 . chapter 6I'm sure someone's mentioned this, but you're own timelines are all scrambled. In the beginning, you say that Roxas' brother is 3 years older than him, but Sora is only a grade ahead, and then later you say he's only a year older. Then, with Axle, you say that he started a year late, but then skipped a grade, but then missed a year, which would still put him only a year behind. Not two. |
 Araea Swiftwind 2009-09-09 . chapter 5Ya know, I'm so glad I never had to take sex ed... |
 Araea Swiftwind 2009-09-09 . chapter 4Hm...mildly interesting... |
 Araea Swiftwind 2009-09-09 . chapter 3Hm...still unsure what I think... |
 Araea Swiftwind 2009-09-09 . chapter 2Mrr...don't know if I like the character of Sora in this... |
 Araea Swiftwind 2009-09-09 . chapter 1Interesting... |