Holy Crap I can not tell you how long it took me to read this but I swear I LOVED it. I stayed up and actually laughed and cried out loud at 3 and 4 in the morning and I couldn't stop reading no matter how important the next morning was. It was so epic and dramatic. I'm so glad my friend reccomended it. I'm sad that finished you are an amazing writer. Please I'm begging don't leave me hanging I liked Axie's pov. Trust me you will definately be seeing a lot if reveiws by me and I am really inspired by you. I'm working on and off on a piece if my own. I'd live it if you would read it and help me with feed back. I'll hopefully post it soon. Keep up the great work.

~ Sarah

Your an amazing writer and its very rare that a book or film brings tears to my eyes but no matter how many times I read this it still makes me cry. Every single time. And I love it. <3

AWESOME story. I loved it and I want to go back and read it again.

Aww ANGST!! XD
Wanna... read...sequel.. but.. school. -collapses-

Ahaha, little hints of Zemyx? Even if it wasnt... I saw it 8D

D8 Why make Zexy die? HE DIDNT DO ANYTHING?! D:

Wah, cliffhangy D8

I thought the 'busted' meant that Axel's dad came home and saw Roxy and all that shizz xD
BAD MARLY!

M, hot make-out session 8D

Ohohohho, the ending was very yaoi-full :D

Hehe, this chapter was so awkward yet cute at the same time :D

I'm sure someone's mentioned this, but you're own timelines are all scrambled. In the beginning, you say that Roxas' brother is 3 years older than him, but Sora is only a grade ahead, and then later you say he's only a year older. Then, with Axle, you say that he started a year late, but then skipped a grade, but then missed a year, which would still put him only a year behind. Not two.

Ya know, I'm so glad I never had to take sex ed...

Hm...mildly interesting...

Hm...still unsure what I think...