|Reviews for Breathe, Just Breathe|
| Notinyourlifetimehoney 4/13/12 . chapter 1
That is so sad. You know what I was thinking whoever the divorce lawyers they hired will rake up so much dough. Lol.
| Julie Sue 2/23/12 . chapter 1
WOW how powerful!
| Forgottobealover 11/26/11 . chapter 1
First of all, You used an Anna Nalick song. that makes this story awesome.
Second, the story way written well, fit the verses and so forth, normally i dislike songfics, but this was great :D.
Only bad thing is that Rory and Logan don't end up together :/.
but then again, they don't do that in the actual series either.
| astragail 2/17/09 . chapter 1
Wow. all i have to say is wow! good job.
| JoPoGirlsKickAss 12/26/08 . chapter 1
That's so sad. but good job :)
| SassyAni 8/16/08 . chapter 1
Oh, G-d. This is so hard to read. I think Lorelei belongs with Chris, but regardless. I can see Rory staying with Dean out of a sense of duty, because she's done it before. Your writing is great!
| rizandace 3/8/08 . chapter 1
i love this! it made me cry!
| thebuzz1919 1/26/08 . chapter 1
This is amazing.
It put me into this mood, so It's like I'm in daze now.
It was very powerful and well written.
I really love this.
| GilmoreGirl916 6/3/07 . chapter 1
OMG I love this it is sad but really well writen I absolutly love all of your stories and have read them all! You are awsome keep writing!
| true-RLfan 12/20/06 . chapter 1
wow.. that was a great oneshot. oh and just to be corny i read it while listening to 2am and the song ended just as i read the last sentence which helped the overall effect.
i love your stories!
| GGmadness2006 12/17/06 . chapter 1
love has a wierd way of expressing it self great job i loved it this is the kind of story you dont read every day its real plesae post more soon!1
| Megan 12/10/06 . chapter 1
That's what's going to happen isn't it? I hate that. The story was good, I mean, but I hate that they're lives are going to turn out like that. It sucks.
Good story, bad situation. I hpope you understand what I'm rambling about.
| taylorash 11/21/06 . chapter 1
I LOVED LOVED LOVED this. Excellent writing, you did a beautiful job.
| Nicole Therese 10/27/06 . chapter 1
I loved the story, it is so deep. I actually listened to the song while I read it. It was written beautifully. Amazing job.
| uninvited2104 7/29/06 . chapter 1
Wow that was so sad. I love that song by the way.