OMG! I read this story years ago and loved it! I even downloaded it to my computer to read again and again! But I moved and got new computers and lost it. I have been searching for almost 2 years now for this story! I'm so glad I found it! THank you for righting it!

Oh, I had tears in my eyes after reading this. It was just so wonderful. You're so good with the angst and writing emotions. I could just feel Eames' pain.

I always enjoy the way you write Logan. I could so see Bobby sticking around to watch over her. He would never fully be able to leave.

And the ending ... Goren and Eames were reunited! Aww, that was sweet. Now they'll never be apart.

Fantastic job!

I know you wrote this a long time ago, but you're by far my favorite author on here, so I've been reading all of your stories. I liked this one in particular. This is the second time I read it, and both times, I couldn't help but cry. I can only imagine how hard this was to write, but it was truely amazing, as all of your other stories. You wrote each character perfectly, and I can only imagine what it would be like to be Alex in this story.

Aw jeez, you made me cry...

I LOVE the ending! I was hoping it was going to end something like that. Great job!

Snyder

...OK...I love you again...Kinda sad Bobby never had a chat with Lewis. I mean...childhood friend and all. But yea, 3 detectives dead. Sucks for Deakens and Barek. But whatever, Bobby and Alex are happy therefore I can be happy.

OMG. You got me really crying!

Great job!

I should've saved this one for after work because now I'm tearing up! Great ending to this fic. Incredible emotion.

Man... maybe an attachment to this fic to see how Deakins deals? Poor guy loses three of his best detectives... its gotta be a rough year. :)

Great work!

Ok, that was hard just to read, I can't imagine how hard it was to write it! Anyway, you did a great job with it!

*cries* It's so sad, but I'm also glad she went home... A beautiful ending. I really loved it. And I'm so glad you put that last bit in. It was perfect. Both stories were perfect and had me in tears. So incredibly devistating. Beautiful work the whole way through. :)

Oh I so was not expecting an update on this one. Brilliant! I'm wasn't sure I was into the idea of everyone dying and Alex going "home" to Bobby at first. However, when you move past the initial thoughts and get down to the fact that her family and the people around her that love her have made peace with the situation... it's really moving. Kudos to you for writing something incredibly tough.

fantastic, beautifully written and one of your best yet.

:-)

thewomanwhosoldtheworld

ok, so i called it up without thinking and started reading, even though i've told you i avoid stories where the main characters die. and i happened to glance down far enough to see bobby walking around, so i read enough to want to take a chance and go back to the beginning and read the whole thing. i shed a lot of tears, but i have to say it's a beautiful story, and it left me feeling a little sad but good. i'm glad i read it, even though i'm still going to avoid the death stories generally. very, very nice work!

I have tears running down my face, and i cant stop!

That was so sad, but the ending was perfect, it was beautiful.

that was wonderful, I normally don't like CD's but this one was lovely AND had me crying... Hope you're this inspired for your other WIP's :-)