This was a great first chapter. Onward to the second for me. Favoriting too. I love OHSHC, and I was not dissapointed when I read this first bit. It doesn't say it's complete, so you should defiinately add another chapter if you want.

mary sue ahoy

awsome fic thus far! can't wait to see who truly winds up going out w/ rei and if rin will make another apperance lol cause she really is perfict for tamaki well I hope you update soon till next review Ja-ne

Cat

OH WOW! Poor Kyo-chan really loves her! And he's willing to let her go! What a sweet heart! XD I wonder what Kaoru and Hikaru are planning though...

HAHAHAHAHAHA! Aw man, that was priceless! hehehehehe...well, at least he did do the right thing at the end. *sigh* poor guy

yay! that was awesome! I guess I can see the resemblance in our stories...but their are alot of things that are def. different. _ I really do like it though, are you finishing it? I hope you do!

hahahahaha...ok, so I'm reading through your story and decided to review right here to tell you...THAT WAS SO FUNNY! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! ok, I'm ok now. _

kawaii! nice story. update soon

OMG! I love it Update!

i liked the chapter but can u add some humor in it just asking cuz it seems a bit depressing but besides that, overall it was good

OMG! THIS FIC IS SO CUUTTE! KAWAI! Aw...Kaoru and Rei-chan! Too cute!

I don't see you mention Haruhi alot, I think you should more...

I love your story! It was so fascinating. It appealed to me and yeah...GOOD JOB...Update soon please!

AWESOME! I love Kaoru (he's my favorite) and the fact that this seems like it isn't completely twincest is a nice change. Please update!

HAHAHAHA! I like it! I would kill them if that happened. update soon!

Uh oh...poor Rei. I would have killed them personally with my bare hands if that ever happened to me...I really would too.