That was very funny when she told them that their show was cancelled! Looking forward to the next update!

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Well done. Of course, we all know what we should do if we ever find ourselves in the universe of one of our favorite TV shows (and sadly, I'm not kidding), but you handled it well, and I especially liked their reaction to discovering they were TV characters.

G9od this story rules, I love it, keep going.

I love the way this story is unreeling ... and that might be one of the great chapter closing lines ever.

Good sense of the confusion the character experiences ... I liked the "spooky" factor.