hey, wow, this poem was bloody amazing! lmao, sry. but no, really, i absolutley loved this poem! awsome job!
do you think that you could drop by my story and give it a read and review? i'd really appreciate it if you did. =D

First time I've read anything from Harry Potter.
I saw that it was a poem, and decided to read it.
This was really good! I felt like there was a lot of meaning and feelings in this poem. You sure know how to write poems that catches the reader's attention and interest. You're great!
I was wondering from who'se point of view the poem was written. Perhaps someone like Dumbledore? I can imagine he'd say something like this, since he's so old and wise. It's certainly not one of Lord Voldemort's followers, that's for sure. They would hardly be saying that people can construct peace and harmony, would they? This poem was really good! You really made one of the good points about the Harry Potter series clear. That people are strong, and that they can resist and fight evilness, if they want to. You're excellent at writing poems!
I don't need to read more than one to see that you've got a lot of potential. Keep it up!
Uchiha Aywin