Super angsty, but very accurate characterization (though occasionally I wasn't sure about Ritsuka as he could have responded in 2 ways to the events)

So sad! ç0ç Please, a sequel! I beg you!

wow... just wow. amazing story, and very good characterization of the characters. it was so angsty that i was sure it would have a sad ending, but you completely turned it around. somewhat confusing, but in a very good way! great job, thank you!

aw! totally confusing but cute and understandable at the same time

That was amazing! I absolutely loved it. You write very well.

I really, really love this story. As I said in a previous review, ages ago, that this story is as close to the real deal as I've ever seen.

I especially liked the part with Soubi facing up against Semei because...I am an angst wh0re.

This is the only lovless story I've ever read, and I don't feel like I need to read anymore. Wonderful!

sweet

bless! OMG Update! Update!

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I really enjoyed the plot-line and it was well written. Double bonus points!

cute.. and interesting..

please continue..

i like where 'Silence' is going

when are you going to finish this?

o that was really interesting . so please please please post more soon *puppy dog pout*

Wow... I am a bit speechless. What a haunting portrait of our loveles couple. I love the idea of the spells and you handled the spell battle very well :) It is very hard to translate it into something believable in the written word!

OMG I want to know so badly what will happen next here... will Ritsuka get over it... how will Soubi go on... so typically Ritsuka to blame soubi for showing him the truth.

Thanks so much for sharing this it was wonderful.

omg wow your story is really good!

Really good. Is this a oneshot? Or are you adding on?