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i know
2006-12-30
ch 1, anon.
abusei know this is mean but yeah no happy ending for DAwson. and i always like it when people make Jack not gay
superfan24
2006-12-20
ch 1,
abusethat was really cute! i liked it a lot. any story involving dawson ding in a painful and fiery way is good in my book. (and that part made me laugh too!) i thought p/j were adorable in this!
Redzy
2006-07-12
ch 1,
abuseum i am so sorry that was awful, i hated it
carebear00
2006-07-09
ch 1,
abuseBwah! I love this so much. Thanks so much for being a PJ-er and Dawson-hater. Heh. The ending was perfect.

There are numerous typos here, but the story itself was great.
nrgirl90
2006-06-27
ch 1,
abuseWow you must really hate dawson to put him in that perspective and haveing him killed in the end dont upu think that was just a little harch. lol well besides that i thought that this was a great story i always wanted jack and jen to get married i mean they were soulmates after all.
paceyjoeytruelove
2006-06-27
ch 1,
abuseI think this has the potential of being a great story.
Some advice if you don't mind, I think it would make the story flow better if instead of using J for Jen and Jo for Joey if you wrote it like a novel. I really do like this story and I think you should continue more on it.
stephi889
2006-06-25
ch 1,
abusehaha i love it...i love the ending, the last line is classic.
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