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MaStEr-Of-YoUr-FaTe 2008-07-10 ch 14,	abusePlease update soon! I love this story SO much! you're an awesome auther. if u could use original charecters, this book would SELL! MaStEr/Lyllith
neko-fox1212 2008-06-17 ch 12,	abusethis is a awesome story can't ait to see what happens next
Chibi Strawberry Neko 2008-06-13 ch 14,	abuse^^ I hope that there is some more dannysam fluff
Marcus S. Lazarus 2008-05-15 ch 14,	abuseDAMN... It's official; you have once again created a truly EXCELLENT piece of work here! From the moment the story began, the fundamental concept of it- Sam as the lonely girl who attracts the attention of one of, if not THE, most feared ghost on the planet, who just so HAPPENS to be 'Phantom'- captivated my attention, and everything that's happened since then just has me ever more interested. If nothing else, the way in which you've portrayed the growing 'bond' between Phantom/Danny and Sam was EXCELLENT; even as Sam was clearly afraid of what 'Phantom' could do to her, you could see her becoming more and more intrigued by him, just as you could see why Phantom was so interested in her in the first place (Although, admittedly, that part's fairly easy; his kind of nigh-omnipotent creep are always interested in the people who DON'T give into them that easily). True, I'm not entirely sure about the idea of TUCKER having a crush on Sam, but hey; it adds another complicated little personal dynamic to the story, and that's reason enough to accept it as far as I'm concerned. And as for this latest turn of events, with it being revealed that Phantom's still half-ghost and VLAD (God, that man really IS a bastard, isn't he?) deliberately repressed his memories of his human life in order to mould him into the perfect ghost-son... It's official; that man REALLY needs to get a life, doesn't he? (True, I don't quite get why Plasmius didn't just dump that box containing Danny's memories somewhere where Phantom would never find it rather than keep it in his castle where it could be discovered this easily, but he probably figured that Phantom would never actually disobey him to that extent.) Plus, of course, this latest chapter was VERY moving; after she knows what her brother's become over the last few years, even without knowing the full details of what happened to him since he met Sam, Jazz is still just grateful to have Danny back, no matter what he's become. Once again, I hope this is just a very bad case of writer's block rather than you abandoning this story; it's yet another thing that I really think almost DESERVES to be completed.
Elaienar 2008-03-25 ch 14,	abuseSo ... would it be rude if I asked when the next chapter is coming out? Because if it is then I won't. :D This story is really interesting, and I'd simply love to see where it goes after this. Um ... and FF suggests "well rounded critique", so for my two cents - the plot is the best part of the story. The way you've been able to twist Danny's character in appropriate proportions to what he's gone through and lost, and yet retain a fair amount of his in-character-ness is next. The way you tell the story is another good thing. The one thing that I think could use some work is the spelling, grammar, and punctuation; also the story occasionally slips from past tense to present tense and back, which is distracting for the reader. Other than that, great job!
Elaienar 2008-03-25 ch 13,	abuseOoh. Can't wait to see how Danny explains himself to Jazz. XD
Elaienar 2008-03-25 ch 12,	abuseI have an irresistible urge to say "poor Tucker" over and over again...
Elaienar 2008-03-25 ch 10,	abuseDing-dong the witch is dead - uhh, sorry. I mean, condolences on the loss of a truly great small green guy. I liked this chapter; your humour is enjoyable. (And poor Tucker!)
Elaienar 2008-03-25 ch 9,	abuseThat's EXACTLY what I would have thought if I was Tucker. Poor kid.
Elaienar 2008-03-25 ch 7,	abuseOh, ouch, that's gotta hurt. And on a side note, hurrah! Maybe now he'll stop being all ... uh ... sadistic. That would be nice.
Elaienar 2008-03-25 ch 5,	abuseHm ... this father Phantom occasionally mentions wouldn't be Plasmius, would it? I think that would explain his uh ... sadistic attitude in some part, anyway...
Elaienar 2008-03-25 ch 3,	abuseBuh. Your Danny's scarier than Plasmius ever was. I think I'M going to be sleeping with the light on for weeks. DX
Elaienar 2008-03-25 ch 1,	abuseYeah, sadistic isn't too strong a word, and "neck-deep" just about decribes is perfectly, in my opinion. I'm very interested in seeing where this goes - good job of making the first chapter grab the attention of the reader!
demonic angel23 2008-03-23 ch 14,	abusehey you've got a great story going on! hopefully u can update soon. it's really interesting. :]
phantomdreamer1018 2008-03-22 ch 14,	abuseWow. I mean really. This story is wonderfully written and has great elements in it that make it unique. Your plots is intriguing. Although, I don't know how realistic it would be that Sam would be THAT oblivious for THAT long about Tucker's crush on her. Believe me, that relationship sucks and you kinda catch on after about three years. But still, keep up the good work. ~Molly~

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