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| Sailor Phantom of Middle Ea... 2007-07-16 ch 10,  | abuseYAYS! An update! Things are getting really interesting now. Crono and Marle WHO! |
| vines-throughXfate 2007-04-29 ch 9, | abuseInteresting Inteesting, cant wait for the next chap, update soon please! |
| DragonOTDarkFlame 2007-04-18 ch 9, | abuseThis story is great! I'm seriously looking forward to Kid and Serge finding each other...and a double tech with serge and crono!! So...DON'T LET ME DOWN PLEASE! |
| Glen-Hikari 2007-04-17 ch 9, | abuse*claps* this is great I can't wait for more |
| Glen-Hikari 2007-04-12 ch 8, | abusenice keep going I can hardly wait for more |
| Sailor Phantom of Middle Ea... 2007-02-20 ch 8, | abuseYAYS! Another chapter! What is this new threat that worries Lucca and now Crono and Marle? Can't wait for more! |
| DragonOTDarkFlame 2007-01-17 ch 7, | abuseVery nice! |
| Sailor Phantom of Middle Ea... 2007-01-05 ch 7, | abuseNice. Like the crossover. Lucca might be alive in this world! YAYS! If your busy to check over the chapter, put it in word perfect and have a spell check. It's fast and easy. |
| Sailor Phantom of Middle Ea... 2007-01-05 ch 6, | abuseAH! MAGUS! *does Happy Dance* |
| Sailor Phantom of Middle Ea... 2007-01-05 ch 5, | abuseThey remembered! Again, poor Serge. No one believes him. Awesome job. Once again, red over the chapters. Simple mistakes are made if you or someone else doesn't read over them. |
| Sailor Phantom of Middle Ea... 2007-01-05 ch 4, | abuseRight at the beginning "Serge feels alone" it should be "Serge felt alone" Also, in the same paragraph, does should be did. You use does if someone is talking about him. Not if it's third person. |
| Sailor Phantom of Middle Ea... 2007-01-05 ch 3, | abuseRead over your chapters. You made a few mistakes like here(hear) and how (know how). Also, don't start sentences with And or But. They conect them, not make them. Poor Serge, everyone think's he's nuts. |
| Sailor Phantom of Middle Ea... 2007-01-05 ch 2, | abuseKid livess! Expect silly comments along with helpful ones. Very interesting. |
| Sailor Phantom of Middle Ea... 2007-01-05 ch 1, | abuseNice intro. The only thing I saw wrong was this: “I will search find you, I promise..." I think you meant find. Other than that, it's good. |
| Maya-Nee 2006-12-17 ch 6, | abuseCol! Nice fic. I hope you update as soon as you can ^^ Cheers! |