I'll be damned, indeed. You managed to make the Pentagon of all places sound like a romantic place to meet. Now that's talent.

I'm so thoroughly enjoying this series. It's wonderfully creative, and who wouldn't love a charming Jayne!

Whoo hoo, they're gonna go on a date!

-Ellie

Brilliant I love this series great work. :D

I love these little interludes!! Are we going to get more? I think they are wonderful!
Just wanted to let you know, even if i am a little late!

Great story. I love this incarnation of River and Jayne from Bound. I hope there is more to follow.

tehe, firefly...

heehee cute :)

Great nickname for River's dad to call her.
I'll bet Jayne's subordinate was really confused by his colonel running off to flirt with a beautiful girl in the middle of a sentence :)

I read your 'BOUND' series today and I have completely fallen in love with it! Very refreshing to read and I love the dialogues. Please update soon!

Cool story...it's true, I suppose...?

Kinda curious how people just "bump" into on another in one of the most secure buildings on the face of the planet. Well, maybe River had a visitor pass. Anyhow, this little vignette made me think of a little add-on:

Young Lieutenant - Do you know her, sir?

Colonel Jayne - Not really.

Young Lieutenant - Oh, then can I?

Colonel Jayne - No!

Just thought I'd share. Waiting to see what happens when they do go out.

yah for another installment! More wonderful Rayne moments, as always. I love these little drabbles into River and Jayne's past lives. Keep up the great work!!

Fun, fun, fun! Can hardly wait to see where this is going. Great chapter. I actually went back and re-read a few of your stories. Just as entertaining the second time around.