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Zombie Master
2009-04-11 . chapter 6
What is a werga? Good story by the way.
RoseA26
2009-04-10 . chapter 12
I was really pleased to see this, great little ending to Year 4, thanks!
I do hope you carry on into year 5, I would really love to know how Jack managed to survive out in space in a little air bubble, and of course all the mystery with the Asgards...intriguing!
Love your writing so am looking forward to anything that gets posted, many thanks.
PapayaK
2009-04-07 . chapter 12
Yeah! A new General Jack chapter! Can't wait for more!
Latergatr
2009-04-06 . chapter 12
Whew! Garmr's safe! I've been so worried! So this is the last of year 4? Still kind of dangling here as to what's up with the Asgard...
But I love all your stories, so happy you are writing more. Look forward to the next!
smithcrafter
2009-04-06 . chapter 12
So is this the last chapter of year four? You say "the end" at the end of the chapter, but you don't have the story categorized as "complete". I've really enjoyed all four years. But then again, some new campers' stories would be fun, too ...especially if you could come up with some that back up in time to when the campers were still kids. :)
Andriabow
2009-04-06 . chapter 12
Wonderful chapter. Keep up the great writing. Thanks
gibblesgal
2009-04-06 . chapter 12
Can Jack ever get a nice, quiet vacation? Not while you're around, apparently. LOL

Ew! Yuck! Gross! Mutant raccoons and a hungry werga.
Well, how about just a satisfied werga, but you know, Garmr could have been doing more than hunting while he was out and about. There could be future mutants, you know. They could be half alien werga and half of whatever he found that was ready and available. Look people, little Garmrs! Or worse, Garmr could be transformed into a mutant from devouring the flesh of these mutant raccoons.

As usual, your writing has given me more than I'd anticipated. I'm glad you are still writing, albeit less often. Whatever it may be that you write, just press that notice button and I shall read it. I certainly hope that RL can improve as soon as possible.
sheila
2009-04-05 . chapter 12
Loved the new chapter. I hope you will reconsider and write another soon. I have been following the series from the start and you have done a fantastic job. You have a great imag-ination. The storyline has had more twists and turns than a snake and no shortage of suprises. You have kept true to the characters and the show. Please keep writing it.
Entilzha
2009-04-05 . chapter 12
Thanks :)
PatriciaS
2009-04-05 . chapter 12
Thank you Thank you ... I was wondering if we might see another chapter last night and look it came!

Brilliant .. love the idea of the raccoons and a pissed of Garmr because Jack got them first. Do you think Garmr brought him along to show off and failed...

Sorry to hear this might be the last for a awhile but then again you did say muse might give us something else ... hope so.

Thanks for taking the time and sharing them with us.
tinker
2009-04-05 . chapter 12
Hehe. Go Garmr! Now that, I didn't think of - actual mutants!
Tribal Matriach
2009-04-04 . chapter 12
Wish you were gonna start on year 5 straight away! Though I do understand you have to have proper motivation as well as inspiration to write.
You just do it so damn well!
Thanks at least for rounding it up... I hate it when authors leave fics unfinished!
Shadowgal ANBU
2009-02-21 . chapter 11
This is sad I managed to read your General Jack series in two days. I'm dead tired and have to be up in a couple of hours so I'm going to bed now. You have a great series going so don't stop now, Shadow.
Susan
2008-08-29 . chapter 11
LOL! Love the update, waiting for me...keep them rolling, and hope the new job pans out well.
Latergatr
2008-08-26 . chapter 11
Oh, no! Garmr's missing! We'll all be in Minnesota combing the woods for him. My favorite OC ever.
Glad to see the update. Was beginning to worry! Love the story.
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