I truely enjoyed this Dotty story. There was no cheating,no humiliating my Letty girl,just an amazing display of Dotty love and how their fated to be together.Thanks.

Great first start! I'm pleased with the intense emotions all ready showing up and you wrote them very well. I'm intrigued to see what else is up your sleeve!

Perfect, I think is the only way to describe this ending. Because sometimes that’s just want, the happily every after and if anyone deserves to be happy then it’s Dom and Letty and the rest of the team. I really wish I could think of more to say, but there’s nothing I haven’t said before apart from thank-you for writing such an amazing story.

I am sad that this is over and I really hope you decide to write more, but in the mean time I will go and read the rest of you work.

Love Lamb

YES!! I’m so happy that they’ve finally made it, far too happy considering it’s just a fic, but I can’t help but get caught up in their story. I think it’s good that Latty is finally letting go and moving on and of course I love the fact that Dom is the one helping her to do so. I’m just sad that I’m almost at the end of such a great read.

Love Lamb

Talk about innuendoes, but the banter between them was bloody perfect. I think that one of the things I love most about Dom and Letty as a couple is that it’s so obvious that they’re equals.

You just now that there is no way Letty will let Dom get out of hand. And by the same token you know that she’d never be able to walk over him the way she would just about any other guy.

I know it sounds corny and really sappy but they really were just made for each other.

Love Lamb

They both know that something is there but for whatever reasons neither of them will act, which in it’s self if fine. But sometimes it seems as if they will never make it, which is wrong cus I know that they will.

Sorry, my inner hopeless romantic is starting to get desperate. Just as I think I’ve got her beaten up she pops wanting everything to be all hearts and flowers and other overly sappy things. Next chapter here I come.

Love Lamb

Do I have to review? I just want to go and read the rest. Part of my was just yelling jump him/her by the time I got to the end of this chapter, but in a way I think it was probably best that there was no simultaneous jumping going on. Even though I really wanted there to be.

I really like the way you’re developing the relationship between the two of them, as well as the way both of them are growing as characters. Letty growing up and Dom dealing with Letty growing up. It’s a great reading combination.

Love Lamb

I know it might sound strange but I love seeing this more fragile side to Letty, Even with everything that she goes through in the films we only ever see her tough side, even when she’s all banged up. It’s nice to see her being a bit vulnerable and yet still being Letty.

And I feel for Dom, it’s so hard being caught between doing what you want and doing what you know to be right. Also I don’t think that talk will work much and I’m so happy about that.

Love Lamb

Well that sure explains a lot. Poor Letty, going through something like that and then to feel as if she was the only one that remembered. I can not even begin to imagine how hard that must be. Another amazing chapter, bring on the next one.

Love Lamb

Ok, not really much to say here but that's just I wan't to go and read the next chapter, which should tell you have much I'm liking this already.

Also I really want to know what's up with this date? Just what happened? Reading on to find out.

Love Lamb

Great last chapter! =) I liked it that you made Letty pregnant in it and also lol when Dom was like there was no Im pregnant and im fat from letty.lol. Oh and also aw they named the kid after Letty's brother CJ. Also Im guessing they also put Jesse in it cause you made Jesse die in it. Also I loved the ending line that he sucked it up and grabbed the food first, because he had a lot to be thankful for!! =) Well great fan fiction I enjoyed it a lot and I know there is a lot and im working on one myself but i love reading fan fictions on how dom and letty got together!! =) great fan fiction and i really think that you should make more with dom and letty!! =)

Great chapter and lol in the begining when neither letty and dom were only and how bad they want to have sex they cant.lol. Also i love in the begining when dom says that he only thinks about letty and cant really stop adn that he doesnt even bother with the racer chaser anymore. Oh and lol when Dom and Letty are kissing in the garage and then Mia walks in on them lol. Also I love it that Dom was trying to talk her into movng outta her house and to go live with him and Mia. I feel bad for Letty thought that she keeps thinking about her brother the most and then her father. Also ooh Dom and Letty finally did it lol nice i cant wait to read the next and final chapter!! =)

Great chapter and also in the begining i love it how dom doesnt like many guys being around letty but i dont like it that he will just hook up with any girl at their parties. I also like it how sometimes when letty is talking that dom cant help but just look at her and think about kissing her. Also i liked it near the end when dom told letty that CJ wanted her to find someone good and to be safe! =) Also I loved the ending when Dom and Letty finally became well dom and letty.lol. Great chapter and i cant wait to read the next one sucks that there are only 2 more chapter left to read though! =( cant wait to read the next chapter!! =)

Great chapter and aslo i liked it that when letty wrote a letter to him that he kept it and would re-read it. Oh and also that so sucks for letty that her dad died. i know that she hated him and all but now she has no family around her anymore. also i liked it that dom didnt like it that the team let letty go there by herself! =) Oh and also i love it that he looks over at letty's house and goes over there and that he just stays there looking at her for a few minutes.Also i love it how when he is with letty that he forgets everthing that was happeneding jsut a little while to him.cant wait to read the next chapter!! =)

Great chapter and also i liked it that when letty got up the next morning that the Toretto's got her, her favorite food and tried to make her feel better and also i liked it that mia was upset that she wasnt there for letty and oh i see that you put dom's dad dieing in this chapter too. Oh and also i liked it that letty went to dom when he went to the beach the day before he got taken in i liked the little talk that they had. also hm at the end i thought that dom and letty were going to kiss each other. cant wait to read the next chapter!! =)