Very powerful.
Nicely done.

Palenovember you are an amazing writer and obviously can really tell what is going on inside the characters head. I am impressed by this art work, this feast for the mind. Once again brilliant. Person

Ok, let me tell you this: I LOVED it!! It was amazing! it's been a while since i've read a fic THIS GOOD!! seriousely, I really really LOVED it.

On another note: your writing is wonderful, just wonderful. And, in my opinion, this is set sometime at the end of the book, when elphie's at Kiamo Ko. Just an observation. I know you said it was timeless, but that's where I think it belongs.

Again, great work creating the character's feelings and perceptions. Awesome work and writing. I really enjoyed it.

*staring blankly at screen* Woah. Please update soon. This is very...God, what's the word? You're leavin' me hanging. Let's put it that way

Well, I think your muse knows what it's talking about! And they're just about seamlessly in character, as far as I can tell - I'm sure as heck no Gregory Maguire, though; my fanfics are testament to that *grins sheepishly* My Elphaba is slowly (er, not-so-slowly) losing any resemblance to the Elphaba in the book - I'm trying really hard to fix that, partially why I haven't updated myself in forever. That, and PreCalculus. That class is impossible. Don't become a junior. Seriously, just don't if you can help it. :) Sorry, I tend to talk way too much. Anyway, give your muse some credit! It did good!

EE I LOVE IT.

This was amazing, and also really sad.

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